Listened on laptop speakers and sounded great!
Don't have any mixing notes as I was paying more attention to the song, which I guess is good mixing feedback!
Great song! Thanks for sharing

Listened on laptop speakers and sounded great! Don't have any mixing notes as I was paying more attention to the song, which I guess is good mixing feedback! Great song! Thanks for sharing

This sounds really good production wise. If this came on randomly on Spotify, I wouldn't think twice about the production being inadequate -- and in fact I'm grooving hard to this one. Great job!

This sounds really good production wise. If this came on randomly on Spotify, I wouldn't think twice about the production being inadequate -- and in fact I'm grooving hard to this one. Great job!

I love this song! I can only imagine how well it would work live. Love the polite punk aesthetic of ATTENTION!!

My two cents - I would love for the guitars to be a little more in your face in the mix. There’s great energy in the vocal, and I’d love to have the guitar share that more. That said - I really love this track, and was totally grooving to it. ATTENTION!!

I love this song! I can only imagine how well it would work live. Love the polite punk aesthetic of ATTENTION!! My two cents - I would love for the guitars to be a little more in your face in the mix. There’s great energy in the vocal, and I’d love to have the guitar share that more. That said - I really love this track, and was totally grooving to it. ATTENTION!!

Thanks so much!

[quote=xavier marques]Listened on laptop speakers and sounded great! Don't have any mixing notes as I was paying more attention to the song, which I guess is good mixing feedback! Great song! Thanks for sharing[/quote] Thanks so much!

Wow, thanks so much. That's great, maybe my mixing is actually getting better! Haha. Thanks for the kind words

[quote=Sodabelly]This sounds really good production wise. If this came on randomly on Spotify, I wouldn't think twice about the production being inadequate -- and in fact I'm grooving hard to this one. Great job![/quote] Wow, thanks so much. That's great, maybe my mixing is actually getting better! Haha. Thanks for the kind words :)

Thanks a million! Your feedback is really helpful thanks. I'll think about trying to have the guitar a bit more up there. Thanks again!

[quote=Paisleyfrog]I love this song! I can only imagine how well it would work live. Love the polite punk aesthetic of ATTENTION!! My two cents - I would love for the guitars to be a little more in your face in the mix. There’s great energy in the vocal, and I’d love to have the guitar share that more. That said - I really love this track, and was totally grooving to it. ATTENTION!![/quote] Thanks a million! Your feedback is really helpful thanks. I'll think about trying to have the guitar a bit more up there. Thanks again! :)

Cool track!

I dunno how "punk" this idea is; At around 1:25 when the vocals emphasize RE - A - LI - TY!
If one was to add a moment of silence (a quaver, if that), to suspend to drop back into TY!
I feel it would just hit soooo much harder.    RE - A - LI - - TY!
Or line up that "alarm guitar" so it falls in the gap    RE - A - LI - *Beep* - TY!

Rock on! \M/

Cool track! I dunno how "punk" this idea is; At around 1:25 when the vocals emphasize RE - A - LI - TY! If one was to add a moment of silence (a quaver, if that), to suspend to drop back into TY! I feel it would just hit soooo much harder. RE - A - LI - - TY! Or line up that "alarm guitar" so it falls in the gap RE - A - LI - *Beep* - TY! Rock on! \M/

Very cool!

What would you change on the mix if anything?

Very cool! What would you change on the mix if anything?

Oooh interesting idea! May well try that!
Thanks for listening and for your feedback!

[quote=haleja]Cool track! I dunno how "punk" this idea is; At around 1:25 when the vocals emphasize RE - A - LI - TY! If one was to add a moment of silence (a quaver, if that), to suspend to drop back into TY! I feel it would just hit soooo much harder. RE - A - LI - - TY! Or line up that "alarm guitar" so it falls in the gap RE - A - LI - *Beep* - TY! Rock on! \M/ [/quote] Oooh interesting idea! May well try that! Thanks for listening and for your feedback!

Thanks! I think I'd lower one of the sound effects, and then maybe incorporate the notes from the comments above!

[quote=Drum Bender]Very cool! What would you change on the mix if anything?[/quote] Thanks! I think I'd lower one of the sound effects, and then maybe incorporate the notes from the comments above!

This really needs a megaphone, not like a real one, but like a tiny, shitty toy one
- Ebrit

This really needs a megaphone, not like a real one, but like a tiny, shitty toy one - Ebrit

A fun song indeed. I think the mix is great it's just a little quiet compared back to back to other songs. MAKE IT LOUDER! Sounds great and would love to see this live!! 

A fun song indeed. I think the mix is great it's just a little quiet compared back to back to other songs. MAKE IT LOUDER! Sounds great and would love to see this live!!

YESSS!! This is great, nailed it.

YESSS!! This is great, nailed it.

sounds great on my not great laptop speakers at low vol - loud and clear but not too much = it kept my attention

sounds great on my not great laptop speakers at low vol - loud and clear but not too much = it kept my attention

Hahahaha you can literally find inspiration anywhere huh. I would never have guessed this was seeded by Deep Work! I have stolen random ideas and nuggets from books like that before for lyrics to great success.

This is cool. I want to hear the acoustic version

Hahahaha you can literally find inspiration anywhere huh. I would never have guessed this was seeded by Deep Work! I have stolen random ideas and nuggets from books like that before for lyrics to great success. This is cool. I want to hear the acoustic version

i was laughing imagining you doing this live 
this really gets cooking, i'm into it.
ACHTUNG!

i was laughing imagining you doing this live :D this really gets cooking, i'm into it. ACHTUNG!

Haha I should definitely get one!

[quote=Devieus]This really needs a megaphone, not like a real one, but like a tiny, shitty toy one - Ebrit[/quote] Haha I should definitely get one!

Thanks for the feedback. Yes I need to look at getting my tracks louder, this was maxed out and clipping red everywhere haha. I'm lead to believe compression will help. Thanks for listening!

[quote=SQF]A fun song indeed. I think the mix is great it's just a little quiet compared back to back to other songs. MAKE IT LOUDER! Sounds great and would love to see this live!! [/quote] Thanks for the feedback. Yes I need to look at getting my tracks louder, this was maxed out and clipping red everywhere haha. I'm lead to believe compression will help. Thanks for listening!

Thank you for listening!

[quote=DataJanitor]YESSS!! This is great, nailed it. [/quote] [quote=emily]sounds great on my not great laptop speakers at low vol - loud and clear but not too much = it kept my attention [/quote] Thank you for listening! :)

Haha yes ideas can come from everywhere! I'd love for Cal to hear it, maybe I should try to get it to his ears somehow haha.

I think the acoustic version will have to remain as a live speciality!

[quote=prophisee]Hahahaha you can literally find inspiration anywhere huh. I would never have guessed this was seeded by Deep Work! I have stolen random ideas and nuggets from books like that before for lyrics to great success. This is cool. I want to hear the acoustic version[/quote] Haha yes ideas can come from everywhere! I'd love for Cal to hear it, maybe I should try to get it to his ears somehow haha. I think the acoustic version will have to remain as a live speciality!

Hahaha yeah it has been pretty funny and also totally inappropriate a few times. Sometimes I like inappropriate though. Come down for a quiet night and some acoustic pop songs? ACHTUNG

Thanks for listening and your comment!

[quote=jwh]i was laughing imagining you doing this live :D this really gets cooking, i'm into it. ACHTUNG![/quote] Hahaha yeah it has been pretty funny and also totally inappropriate a few times. Sometimes I like inappropriate though. Come down for a quiet night and some acoustic pop songs? ACHTUNG ;) Thanks for listening and your comment!

HAHA been there man. Missing your fine tunes this week 18, hope to see you back this week!

[quote=myfirstpunksong][quote=SQF]A fun song indeed. I think the mix is great it's just a little quiet compared back to back to other songs. MAKE IT LOUDER! Sounds great and would love to see this live!! [/quote] Thanks for the feedback. Yes I need to look at getting my tracks louder, this was maxed out and clipping red everywhere haha. I'm lead to believe compression will help. Thanks for listening![/quote] HAHA been there man. Missing your fine tunes this week 18, hope to see you back this week!

this is great! really love the energy of your tracks. mix really sounds spacious, while still keeping that raw-ness. And the lyrics are spot on.

this is great! really love the energy of your tracks. mix really sounds spacious, while still keeping that raw-ness. And the lyrics are spot on.

Thank you man!

[quote=blighters_rock]this is great! really love the energy of your tracks. mix really sounds spacious, while still keeping that raw-ness. And the lyrics are spot on.[/quote] Thank you man!