This. Is. So. Good. The minimal instrumentation really works. It doesn’t feel like it’s missing anything.

This. Is. So. Good. The minimal instrumentation really works. It doesn’t feel like it’s missing anything.

I'm so sorry to hear about your friend.
"You're caught in a cage, but I know that you'll be free again" and "she cut you and it hurts but I know that you will heal again" really get to me. This is a touching homage.
And I agree with SQF, I think this sounds great as is! I don't feel like anything is missing at all.

I'm so sorry to hear about your friend. "You're caught in a cage, but I know that you'll be free again" and "she cut you and it hurts but I know that you will heal again" really get to me. This is a touching homage. And I agree with SQF, I think this sounds great as is! I don't feel like anything is missing at all.

love the pace of this and such catchy vocals that had me nodding along. This isn't missing anything but more listens!

love the pace of this and such catchy vocals that had me nodding along. This isn't missing anything but more listens! <3

Condolences on your friend, but you have created a lovely little track in tribute.  I agree it sounds great as is and doesn't need anything else added.

Condolences on your friend, but you have created a lovely little track in tribute. I agree it sounds great as is and doesn't need anything else added.

Came across this again while listening to a random WB playlist. I instantly was able to remember whose and what song it was in less than 2 seconds. Goes to show you made something that really left an impression

Came across this again while listening to a random WB playlist. I instantly was able to remember whose and what song it was in less than 2 seconds. Goes to show you made something that really left an impression <3

welp that's me in tears over here

welp that's me in tears over here

my sincere condolences to you. i've had some friends take themselves out of the game too, and it's just so hard to process.

the song is GREAT. like it's so catchy and melodic, but there's a great depth to it. a powerful combination.
and your vocals are on point. really nicely mixed all around.
sounds complete to my ears too. well done, PeterM

my sincere condolences to you. i've had some friends take themselves out of the game too, and it's just so hard to process. the song is GREAT. like it's so catchy and melodic, but there's a great depth to it. a powerful combination. and your vocals are on point. really nicely mixed all around. sounds complete to my ears too. well done, PeterM <3

Powerful stuff
That first line was quite unexpected, but I guess these are things that could happen in life
My condolences
- Ebrit

Powerful stuff That first line was quite unexpected, but I guess these are things that could happen in life My condolences - Ebrit

Wow, powerful song and story. Sounds great

Wow, powerful song and story. Sounds great

Thanks SQF!

Thanks jegasus! I'm just getting started on lyric writing so it's nice to hear your reaction there. It felt good to be channelling my emotions into something creative like this.

Thanks so much Tone Matrix!

Thanks Cosmic Cairns! I agree, it feels good to have made this. Bad news plus weeklybeats equals song about life.

Thanks so much jwh! That is high praise coming from a pro like you haha! But really, thanks so much for your help and tips on the vocals. I'm feeling like it's possible now.

Thanks Ebrit! Yes, life is very unexpected sometimes. I was very upset and glad to have this musical outlet. Appreciate you listening and commenting.

Thanks miraclemiles. I really appreciate your comment.

[quote=SQF]This. Is. So. Good. The minimal instrumentation really works. It doesn’t feel like it’s missing anything.[/quote] Thanks SQF! [quote=jegasus]I'm so sorry to hear about your friend. "You're caught in a cage, but I know that you'll be free again" and "she cut you and it hurts but I know that you will heal again" really get to me. This is a touching homage. And I agree with SQF, I think this sounds great as is! I don't feel like anything is missing at all. [/quote] [quote=jegasus]Came across this again while listening to a random WB playlist. I instantly was able to remember whose and what song it was in less than 2 seconds. Goes to show you made something that really left an impression <3[/quote] Thanks jegasus! I'm just getting started on lyric writing so it's nice to hear your reaction there. It felt good to be channelling my emotions into something creative like this. [quote=Tone Matrix]love the pace of this and such catchy vocals that had me nodding along. This isn't missing anything but more listens! <3[/quote] Thanks so much Tone Matrix! [quote=Cosmic Cairns]Condolences on your friend, but you have created a lovely little track in tribute. I agree it sounds great as is and doesn't need anything else added.[/quote] Thanks Cosmic Cairns! I agree, it feels good to have made this. Bad news plus weeklybeats equals song about life. [quote=jwh]welp that's me in tears over here[/quote] [quote=jwh]my sincere condolences to you. i've had some friends take themselves out of the game too, and it's just so hard to process. the song is GREAT. like it's so catchy and melodic, but there's a great depth to it. a powerful combination. and your vocals are on point. really nicely mixed all around. sounds complete to my ears too. well done, PeterM <3[/quote] Thanks so much jwh! That is high praise coming from a pro like you haha! But really, thanks so much for your help and tips on the vocals. I'm feeling like it's possible now. [quote=DESLRV]Powerful stuff That first line was quite unexpected, but I guess these are things that could happen in life My condolences - Ebrit[/quote] Thanks Ebrit! Yes, life is very unexpected sometimes. I was very upset and glad to have this musical outlet. Appreciate you listening and commenting. [quote=miraclemiles]Wow, powerful song and story. Sounds great[/quote] Thanks miraclemiles. I really appreciate your comment.

I’m so sorry to hear about the circumstances behind this track. It’s a beautiful song and a beautiful tribute.

I’m so sorry to hear about the circumstances behind this track. It’s a beautiful song and a beautiful tribute.