Regarding note on lyrics - well said.
And regarding the song - well played.
Appreciating and vibing with the message this week. Nice work!

Regarding note on lyrics - well said. <3 And regarding the song - well played. :D Appreciating and vibing with the message this week. Nice work!

This is just lovely. I came here from the jwh tune y'all did together and this has the same airy quality. Just lovely.

This is just lovely. I came here from the jwh tune y'all did together and this has the same airy quality. Just lovely.

Wonderful lyrics (and vocal processing), as always. I kinda want to read the unpublished manifesto now though...  Lovely track though, great message.

Wonderful lyrics (and vocal processing), as always. I kinda want to read the unpublished manifesto now though... Lovely track though, great message.

Between you and jwh I'll become a vocalist/lyricist/better guitarist out of pure envy. Just beautiful.

And your percussion is right where it needs to be. Carries the track near the end nicely but I had to specifically listen for it when I read your notes - effective but not interfering or standing out, in something with such beautiful vocals and instrumentation, that's a perfect place for percussion to contribute.

(Trust me there nothing worse in techno than drums that scream OMG NOTICE ME IM DRUMZ)

Wonderful listen as always

Between you and jwh I'll become a vocalist/lyricist/better guitarist out of pure envy. Just beautiful. And your percussion is right where it needs to be. Carries the track near the end nicely but I had to specifically listen for it when I read your notes - effective but not interfering or standing out, in something with such beautiful vocals and instrumentation, that's a perfect place for percussion to contribute. (Trust me there nothing worse in techno than drums that scream OMG NOTICE ME IM DRUMZ) Wonderful listen as always :)

Well put...Really enjoyed both tracks this week, amazing job!

[quote=neon liminal]Between you and jwh I'll become a vocalist/lyricist/better guitarist out of pure envy. Just beautiful.[/quote] Well put...Really enjoyed both tracks this week, amazing job!

i'm so glad this one was rescued from purgatory, wow! everything just works together so well and supports the core of the song.

agreed all around. and yeah, add me to the Cursory manifesto email list ha

for real ^^   that you added this 10 mins before posting is wild. as someone who also struggles with percussion, i can very much relate. but yeah, great (last minute) choices here!

i'm so glad this one was rescued from purgatory, wow! everything just works together so well and supports the core of the song. [quote=Napear]Wonderful lyrics (and vocal processing), as always. I kinda want to read the unpublished manifesto now though... Lovely track though, great message. [/quote] agreed all around. and yeah, add me to the Cursory manifesto email list ha :) [quote=neon liminal]And your percussion is right where it needs to be. Carries the track near the end nicely but I had to specifically listen for it when I read your notes - effective but not interfering or standing out, in something with such beautiful vocals and instrumentation, that's a perfect place for percussion to contribute. [/quote] for real ^^ that you added this 10 mins before posting is wild. as someone who also struggles with percussion, i can very much relate. but yeah, great (last minute) choices here! <3

the soundtrack for empathy rescued from purgatorio!
just so kind and lovely

[img]https://external-content.duckduckgo.com/iu/?u=https%3A%2F%2Fmedia2.giphy.com%2Fmedia%2FqyQwohvnRGbu2smgzF%2Fgiphy.gif%3Fcid%3D790b7611f7db8deac0cc1c1e7b690a928f00c71f8a196679%26rid%3Dgiphy.gif%26ct%3Ds&f=1&nofb=1&ipt=11df2b6b39f8d55b92c11640c61d87a0e59f5307ab59ba8fb24287a2c85d27f1&ipo=images[/img] the soundtrack for empathy rescued from purgatorio! just so kind and lovely

beautiful sounding song.  I too am visiting from JWH's page and really enjoyed what you guys did especially with those guitar line.  Your vocals in this gave me some Bon Iver feels.  Really heartfelt lyrics.  Well done!

beautiful sounding song. I too am visiting from JWH's page and really enjoyed what you guys did especially with those guitar line. Your vocals in this gave me some Bon Iver feels. Really heartfelt lyrics. Well done!

Wonderful, just wonderful. No notes, five stars. Gentle, honest, well executed, the subtle drumming across the board fits the mood perfectly. A full song! Your collab with jwh is also stellar. Such a strong week for you!

> There must be something left for us to mend

Thanks for the notes on the lyrics as to me your song was about a relationship growing and maturing. Sort of a different take on the same subject as "Beth/Rest". And doing it with great grace and subtlety, I might add.

I'm a little embarrassed I read romance into lyrics so often, but hey, if the shoe fits!

Wonderful, just wonderful. No notes, five stars. Gentle, honest, well executed, the subtle drumming across the board fits the mood perfectly. A full song! Your collab with jwh is also stellar. Such a strong week for you! > There must be something left for us to mend Thanks for the notes on the lyrics as to me your song was about a relationship growing and maturing. Sort of a different take on the same subject as "Beth/Rest". And doing it with great grace and subtlety, I might add. I'm a little embarrassed I read romance into lyrics so often, but hey, if the shoe fits!

Wonderful sounding song! Agree with perfect use of drums. Great lyrics, I'm also envious. With you and jwh (Cosmic Cairns and others!) WB is getting a lovely dose of great songwriting this year. Enjoyed your collab with him this week as well. I love your notes on the lyrics. Watch out for the hot takes! 1000% on hummility, being open to perspectives on what we don't know. Made my day, that!

Wonderful sounding song! Agree with perfect use of drums. Great lyrics, I'm also envious. With you and jwh (Cosmic Cairns and others!) WB is getting a lovely dose of great songwriting this year. Enjoyed your collab with him this week as well. I love your notes on the lyrics. Watch out for the hot takes! 1000% on hummility, being open to perspectives on what we don't know. Made my day, that!

You have an ability to work with the spaces, the timing feels so good. There is air between, and then the words or sounds fill it in the way they do best.

You have an ability to work with the spaces, the timing feels so good. There is air between, and then the words or sounds fill it in the way they do best.

Thank you!

Thanks for visiting and for the kind words I really enjoyed jwh's song too.

Thank you! Haha I deleted it and it will never see the light of day

Thanks so much for the kind words I'm glad percussion felt like a good fit

Thank you! So fun to get to read comments from both tracks and get the warm and fuzzies

[quote=levelcapybara]Regarding note on lyrics - well said. <3 And regarding the song - well played. :D Appreciating and vibing with the message this week. Nice work![/quote] :D Thank you! [quote=jegasus]This is just lovely. I came here from the jwh tune y'all did together and this has the same airy quality. Just lovely. [/quote] Thanks for visiting and for the kind words :) I really enjoyed jwh's song too. [quote=Napear]Wonderful lyrics (and vocal processing), as always. I kinda want to read the unpublished manifesto now though... Lovely track though, great message. [/quote] Thank you! Haha I deleted it and it will never see the light of day :lol: [quote=neon liminal]Between you and jwh I'll become a vocalist/lyricist/better guitarist out of pure envy. Just beautiful. And your percussion is right where it needs to be. Carries the track near the end nicely but I had to specifically listen for it when I read your notes - effective but not interfering or standing out, in something with such beautiful vocals and instrumentation, that's a perfect place for percussion to contribute. (Trust me there nothing worse in techno than drums that scream OMG NOTICE ME IM DRUMZ) Wonderful listen as always :)[/quote] Thanks so much for the kind words :) I'm glad percussion felt like a good fit [quote=Sodabelly][quote=neon liminal]Between you and jwh I'll become a vocalist/lyricist/better guitarist out of pure envy. Just beautiful.[/quote] Well put...Really enjoyed both tracks this week, amazing job! [/quote] Thank you! So fun to get to read comments from both tracks and get the warm and fuzzies :)

Thanks so much Coming up with a track this week was made easier by knowing I already got to piggyback off of your great song haha

"soundtrack for empathy" is lovely, thank you

Thank you for visiting and for the kind words! Big Bon Iver fan so I will take it with a smile

Awww shucks, thanks so much. Honestly, I had the same thought that the lyrics sounded almost romantic - this is in part why I felt like explaining a bit about them Giving Beth/Rest another listen with closer attention to the lyrics.

I am in good company Thank you for listening and the kind thoughts.

Thanks so much, I just listened to your track this week and thought that YOU work with spaces so well!

[quote=jwh]i'm so glad this one was rescued from purgatory, wow! everything just works together so well and supports the core of the song. [quote=Napear]Wonderful lyrics (and vocal processing), as always. I kinda want to read the unpublished manifesto now though... Lovely track though, great message. [/quote] agreed all around. and yeah, add me to the Cursory manifesto email list ha :) [quote=neon liminal]And your percussion is right where it needs to be. Carries the track near the end nicely but I had to specifically listen for it when I read your notes - effective but not interfering or standing out, in something with such beautiful vocals and instrumentation, that's a perfect place for percussion to contribute. [/quote] for real ^^ that you added this 10 mins before posting is wild. as someone who also struggles with percussion, i can very much relate. but yeah, great (last minute) choices here! <3[/quote] Thanks so much :) Coming up with a track this week was made easier by knowing I already got to piggyback off of your great song haha [quote=emily][img]https://external-content.duckduckgo.com/iu/?u=https%3A%2F%2Fmedia2.giphy.com%2Fmedia%2FqyQwohvnRGbu2smgzF%2Fgiphy.gif%3Fcid%3D790b7611f7db8deac0cc1c1e7b690a928f00c71f8a196679%26rid%3Dgiphy.gif%26ct%3Ds&f=1&nofb=1&ipt=11df2b6b39f8d55b92c11640c61d87a0e59f5307ab59ba8fb24287a2c85d27f1&ipo=images[/img] the soundtrack for empathy rescued from purgatorio! just so kind and lovely[/quote] :) "soundtrack for empathy" is lovely, thank you [quote=Tone Matrix]beautiful sounding song. I too am visiting from JWH's page and really enjoyed what you guys did especially with those guitar line. Your vocals in this gave me some Bon Iver feels. Really heartfelt lyrics. Well done![/quote] Thank you for visiting and for the kind words! Big Bon Iver fan so I will take it with a smile :D [quote=rplktr]Wonderful, just wonderful. No notes, five stars. Gentle, honest, well executed, the subtle drumming across the board fits the mood perfectly. A full song! Your collab with jwh is also stellar. Such a strong week for you! > There must be something left for us to mend Thanks for the notes on the lyrics as to me your song was about a relationship growing and maturing. Sort of a different take on the same subject as "Beth/Rest". And doing it with great grace and subtlety, I might add. I'm a little embarrassed I read romance into lyrics so often, but hey, if the shoe fits! [/quote] Awww shucks, thanks so much. Honestly, I had the same thought that the lyrics sounded almost romantic - this is in part why I felt like explaining a bit about them :lol: Giving Beth/Rest another listen with closer attention to the lyrics. [quote=miraclemiles]Wonderful sounding song! Agree with perfect use of drums. Great lyrics, I'm also envious. With you and jwh (Cosmic Cairns and others!) WB is getting a lovely dose of great songwriting this year. Enjoyed your collab with him this week as well. I love your notes on the lyrics. Watch out for the hot takes! 1000% on hummility, being open to perspectives on what we don't know. Made my day, that![/quote] I am in good company :) Thank you for listening and the kind thoughts. [quote=Minnamari]You have an ability to work with the spaces, the timing feels so good. There is air between, and then the words or sounds fill it in the way they do best.[/quote] Thanks so much, I just listened to your track this week and thought that YOU work with spaces so well!

Gorgeous, I was hooked from the first five seconds and the rest didn't disappoint. Love the melody, the variations in the drums and the lyrics are great as well. Been playing this on repeat.

Gorgeous, I was hooked from the first five seconds and the rest didn't disappoint. Love the melody, the variations in the drums and the lyrics are great as well. Been playing this on repeat.

Aw shucks, thank you so much!

[quote=ddmm64]Gorgeous, I was hooked from the first five seconds and the rest didn't disappoint. Love the melody, the variations in the drums and the lyrics are great as well. Been playing this on repeat. [/quote] Aw shucks, thank you so much!