First lost comment of 2024… damn.

Welcome to weeklybeats! So glad to have you here. I like the main chorus hook reborn/storm lines. I especially love the melodic change on "place". I'm super jealous of your singing voice. Great vibrato.

Keep it up!

First lost comment of 2024… damn. Welcome to weeklybeats! So glad to have you here. I like the main chorus hook reborn/storm lines. I especially love the melodic change on "place". I'm super jealous of your singing voice. Great vibrato. Keep it up!

Good 90s - 00s vibe, really nice!

Good 90s - 00s vibe, really nice!

great choice on drums. congrats on week 1!

great choice on drums. congrats on week 1!

Great job men! I really like that melody change on "place". I look forward to hearing more songs!

Great job men! I really like that melody change on "place". I look forward to hearing more songs! :)

The instruments are very solid, maybe move the vocals a bit, but still a solid track.
Hope life is better now.
- Spider

The instruments are very solid, maybe move the vocals a bit, but still a solid track. Hope life is better now. - Spider

Hey man, Welcoem to WB! Great job on your track this week! It's a solid outing, great job with the vocals.

Hey man, Welcoem to WB! Great job on your track this week! It's a solid outing, great job with the vocals.

Good track, I like the lyrics. Coincidentally, I’m listening to WB entries at my ex’s apartment now.

Good track, I like the lyrics. Coincidentally, I’m listening to WB entries at my ex’s apartment now. :)

love your voice! looking forward to hearing more

love your voice! looking forward to hearing more

This is a great track! I like the dreamy sounding guitars that you open with. I like the melody you wrote for the "could this be the place where I'm reborn line". I really like how you climb up in pitch on the word reborn.

This is a great track! I like the dreamy sounding guitars that you open with. I like the melody you wrote for the "could this be the place where I'm reborn line". I really like how you climb up in pitch on the word reborn.

Going back and listening to some of your old tracks that I missed!

I like the energy of this! Your melodies and voicing are/were great. I think this one likes the slightly more stripped down feel, as opposed to your later tracks.

That said - a year later, it’s cool to compare and see just how much you improved over the course of the year! Mixing, layering, song structure too. A nifty hint at songs to come

Going back and listening to some of your old tracks that I missed! I like the energy of this! Your melodies and voicing are/were great. I think this one likes the slightly more stripped down feel, as opposed to your later tracks. That said - a year later, it’s cool to compare and see just how much you improved over the course of the year! Mixing, layering, song structure too. A nifty hint at songs to come :)

Haha, that's awesome. I really appreciate the feedback. I actually just listened through all my songs yesterday to see the improvement. It's interesting going down that memory lane. I also spent way more time at the beginning, which kind of shows up in different ways. Like my skills got better, but some of these earlier ones meant more to me.

[quote=Paisleyfrog]Going back and listening to some of your old tracks that I missed! I like the energy of this! Your melodies and voicing are/were great. I think this one likes the slightly more stripped down feel, as opposed to your later tracks. That said - a year later, it’s cool to compare and see just how much you improved over the course of the year! Mixing, layering, song structure too. A nifty hint at songs to come :)[/quote] Haha, that's awesome. I really appreciate the feedback. I actually just listened through all my songs yesterday to see the improvement. It's interesting going down that memory lane. I also spent way more time at the beginning, which kind of shows up in different ways. Like my skills got better, but some of these earlier ones meant more to me.