Sun Dog
By prophisee on April 19, 2026 11:56 pm
This week's topic was inspiration from a sun dog I saw sailing which is a special rainbow like phenomenon that rarely happens off clouds at sunrise or sunset. Pulled out a metaphor for missing life's rewards if you aren't tuned into the present moment and paying attention.
› lyrics
‹ lyrics
[CHORUS]
Late night you’re wide awake
Late night you’re wide awake
Can’t hold on before it drifts away
Blow another second like a hand grenade
[VERSE]
Rainbow halo tango, in a kaleidoscope
Sundown crystals glow while I wait on the waves
The day falls into a haze
Stay too long it decays
I tried to see the sky
But missed the blaze
I’ll glide while I’m alive
Won’t count the days
From morning until night
Remain in tune with sun and moon
Cuz on a moments notice soon
the earth will burn the life you missed
My goal is to write better lyrics this year so I've been following the process and frameworks from Writing Better Lyrics by Pat Pattison.
This is the first time I've had success with the "rhyme worksheet". Haven't found it massively helpful for hooks but it helped me string together a passable rap verse in 5m once the sheet was done. Shared it in the idea section.
› idea and narrative
‹ idea and narrative
A sun dog as a metaphorical reward for presence and seizing the moment
Saw one while sailing at sunset.
Background: The only appear at sunrise and sunset. Bright hotspot vs a rainbow. Appear through ice crystals. Light needs to hit the right cloud and get refracted back at exactly 22 degrees.
Metaphors:
22 degrees - beauty only snaps into focus both with the right outlook, the right moment, and if you’re paying attention
Hotspot - sharpness breaking through the haze. Emotions, fulfillment of desire, etc

› object writing
‹ object writing
Cruising and bobbing along. Moving is a slow but effortless glide. Not like the feeling in a car, where something feels a bit contrived and unnatural about the coasting. More like riding a bike down a hill. This is the natural outcome of harnessing nature. Above the sky is orange and the air is a bit cool. It’s hard to make out all the details around the cranes and ships on the skyline, but a bright light reaches out from the edge of a cloud. Like a rainbow in a tiny spot. Not too bright to look at. Not too dull to miss if you’re looking right at it. Subtle glimmer that feels very out of the usual.
Feel free to roast so I can get better