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A Thousand Cuts

By Paisleyfrog on November 3, 2024 6:42 pm

Another song from me and my wife that we've never recorded. We're hoping that we can finish our second album before the year is up, we're really close. smile

Probably one of the heaviest songs we've done. She wrote these lyrics about seven years ago, and it took a bit to figure out what the song wanted to sound like. It was initially a LOT angrier. It gained its footing when it went from angry to resigned - and a major key.

Continued experiments in minimal recording - this is a live take with no overdubbing. We had tried recording it earlier this week, and neither of us were really happy with it. I had already re-tracked the guitar and added bass, and was starting to go down the road of adding more instruments (with my wife in agreement) - when I thought that I'd prefer taking another run at it. Two mics - go. I just replaced my condenser mic, but my wife still used the SM58 - I prefer her vocals through it. Condenser duties went to the guitar, which I think benefitted from the added high end. Two tracks and a bit of compression and reverb. Done.

Speaking of guitar: this song is the debut of Mary Moon, my Kalamazoo KG-11 (a Gibson budget model from 1938). Found it at a Music Go Round for $10. It was literally in pieces - someone had tried to replace the internal bracing with modern X bracing and given up. Local luthiers told me it wasn't worth what it would cost to fix, so I tried it myself. It plays now. Is it great? Nope, still needs new frets, the intonation is pretty bad, and I wasn't able to keep all of the belly bulge away. But I really really wanted to play it on this song. I thought it was fitting.

Happy to have this one in the can. It's taken a while for us to just appreciate this one as a song, and not have to do a deep cleansing breath afterwords.

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Beautiful. Mary Moon has some deep tones there, and you can hear her scars and wear and tear over the decades coming through with some amazing character. Some things are worth saving.

... and the vocals are wonderful as always lol. You make a wonderful musical team!

Wow right in the feels. Excellent lyrics and vocals, stellar guitar work, and the broken, unwanted guitar sounds perfect in this song. "Character" would be selling it short - with all its buzzy oddness it's the instrument that you reach for when you need a specific kind of special.
Now after those lyrics I'm going to go have a cry somewhere.

It’s almost as if this song was just waiting for the right guitar to bring it to life. You found it in Mary Moon. The guitar’s imperfections translate well to the relationship your wife’s tender voice describes in the lyrics. I love the simplicity that allows the guitar and vocals to truly shine.  That guitar reminds me of my 1930s Kimball baby grand.  She creeks and rattles and is hard to keep in tune, but I love to play her and feel the vibrations from her old and tired strings and wood. 

Oh man... This is such a sad tale... And so beautifully told! The guitar and vocals here fit each other perfectly well.
And I agree with Bunjigram, seems like Mary Moon was what was missing in your earlier takes smile
Just wonderful, folks!!! Keep up the awesome work heart

Great work again. I really like the melody in this. It's familiar but feels fresh too.

neon liminal wrote:

Beautiful. Mary Moon has some deep tones there, and you can hear her scars and wear and tear over the decades coming through with some amazing character. Some things are worth saving.

... and the vocals are wonderful as always lol. You make a wonderful musical team!

Thank you heart There something to the thing about the wood in old guid guitars - Mary Moon is impossibly light when compared to my newer guitars, I think that's part of that low resonance. Also, a neck like a baseball bat.

MRDRCAT wrote:

Wow right in the feels. Excellent lyrics and vocals, stellar guitar work, and the broken, unwanted guitar sounds perfect in this song. "Character" would be selling it short - with all its buzzy oddness it's the instrument that you reach for when you need a specific kind of special.
Now after those lyrics I'm going to go have a cry somewhere.

Thank you - I'm glad I was able to get it tuned well enough for the recording heart

Yeah, these lyrics are rough. They come from a real place, but they've finally healed over enough to not be hard.

Bunjigram wrote:

It’s almost as if this song was just waiting for the right guitar to bring it to life. You found it in Mary Moon. The guitar’s imperfections translate well to the relationship your wife’s tender voice describes in the lyrics. I love the simplicity that allows the guitar and vocals to truly shine.  That guitar reminds me of my 1930s Kimball baby grand.  She creeks and rattles and is hard to keep in tune, but I love to play her and feel the vibrations from her old and tired strings and wood.

Thank you. It makes me so happy that Mary Moon's voice has been heard, and that it worked. It took me a few years (like 10+) to get up the nerve to repair her...she sat in a closet for a long time as just parts.

I love the sound of old pianos. A friend of mine plays in an early jazz group, and has an old piano that he plays old stride music on. You should record a WB track on your Kimball, I would LOVE to hear it.

jegasus wrote:

Oh man... This is such a sad tale... And so beautifully told! The guitar and vocals here fit each other perfectly well.
And I agree with Bunjigram, seems like Mary Moon was what was missing in your earlier takes smile
Just wonderful, folks!!! Keep up the awesome work heart

Thank you so much. It makes me so happy that Mary Moon's buzzy self fits the song. It's what I've always imagined.

SteveSkiano wrote:

Great work again. I really like the melody in this. It's familiar but feels fresh too.

Thank you heart The melody is all my wife's - it's another song where I wanted to stay out of the way and let the words and melody carry the song.

feeling pretty fragile this evening and don't really have the words so i will just say
thank you, both
and i am so happy you saved this guitar

"When the comfort we once shared has turned to dust " damn, that's some Cure level heart ache right there.  Another lovely collab, super exciting the new album is so near.  And nice one saving the guitar, has some great character already.

Beautiful. heart

Bunjigram wrote:

It’s almost as if this song was just waiting for the right guitar to bring it to life. You found it in Mary Moon.

Realized I forgot to say, you're right - the earlier takes this week were on my Epiphone. (The Epi sounds surprisingly thin in comparison).  Didn't even do a practice recording, just tested levels and hit record. I don't play Mary much, but it was absolutely the right moment.

jwh wrote:

feeling pretty fragile this evening and don't really have the words so i will just say
thank you, both
and i am so happy you saved this guitar

Thank you as well heart

lament.config wrote:

"When the comfort we once shared has turned to dust " damn, that's some Cure level heart ache right there.  Another lovely collab, super exciting the new album is so near.  And nice one saving the guitar, has some great character already.

Thank you - yeah, I think these are the best lyrics she's ever written. The chorus is absolutely crushing. Still remember where I was when she first sent them to me, they made an impression.

levelcapybara wrote:

Beautiful. heart

Thank you so much heart

Figured I should share a picture of the old girl.

Oof. The Lyrics are making me think of old relationships I have been in. I am happy to speak of those things in the past tense.  I just got married a week ago. This is a good reminder of how lucky I am to have met my wife.

ENC_ wrote:

Oof. The Lyrics are making me think of old relationships I have been in. I am happy to speak of those things in the past tense.  I just got married a week ago. This is a good reminder of how lucky I am to have met my wife.

CONGRATULATIONS!! heart heart

Same, my friend. These lyrics came from a very real place for my wife - and for me as well. We got married recently as well (as of week 26!) and I consider myself just as lucky.

Paisleyfrog wrote:

CONGRATULATIONS!! heart heart

Same, my friend. These lyrics came from a very real place for my wife - and for me as well. We got married recently as well (as of week 26!) and I consider myself just as lucky.

Thank you and a late congrats back!

beautiful song. The guitar ads character and love the story behind it. Great vocals!

Absolutely beautiful. The acoustic sounds beautiful and what a phenomenal voice. Just beautiful work. Love it.

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