yeeya! move fierce with that vision!

yeeya! move fierce with that vision! [img=fierce]https://media.giphy.com/media/OReZa8HEMEN6TT5y78/giphy.gif[/img]

I think you're being overly harsh. This definitely has the vibe. I think the verse melody, while simple, gets the job done. Sorry to say I couldn't understand the lyrics, though.

During the middle section when you go with a single note on the vocals, I think there's a great opportunity there for multiple layered vocals, either singing same note to fill it out, or possibly harmonies.

I like your idea about process over product. I had a really hard time committing to something this week too. I keep thinking that I'd love to get a week ahead of the game and basically have 6 days to dial in the song I've mostly recorded the previous week, with less time pressure. Not sure how to make that happen without deliving a fiery turd on the front end.

ps - you should add tags to your songs. I try to listen through everything tagged rock, guitar, etc every week.

I think you're being overly harsh. This definitely has the vibe. I think the verse melody, while simple, gets the job done. Sorry to say I couldn't understand the lyrics, though. During the middle section when you go with a single note on the vocals, I think there's a great opportunity there for multiple layered vocals, either singing same note to fill it out, or possibly harmonies. I like your idea about process over product. I had a really hard time committing to something this week too. I keep thinking that I'd love to get a week ahead of the game and basically have 6 days to dial in the song I've mostly recorded the previous week, with less time pressure. Not sure how to make that happen without deliving a fiery turd on the front end. ps - you should add tags to your songs. I try to listen through everything tagged rock, guitar, etc every week.

Rock yeah!

Love the energy, this is an in your face track, and there is a lot there for an only 1m06 song. Guitars sounds super big.

Rock yeah! Love the energy, this is an in your face track, and there is a lot there for an only 1m06 song. Guitars sounds super big.

Trash punk is really just punk if you think about it

Trash punk is really just punk if you think about it

I liked how you left notes on what you learned.  I need to keep notes.

I'm not sure what could be considered embarrassing about this?  I do like punk vocals that get wild and howling, so that's cool in my book

I liked how you left notes on what you learned. I need to keep notes. I'm not sure what could be considered embarrassing about this? I do like punk vocals that get wild and howling, so that's cool in my book