Dig that chorus.  Rockin'  \m/

Dig that chorus. Rockin' \m/

That middle section with the hand claps is deeeelightful! Love the energy! Glad you're back. Keep it up!

That middle section with the hand claps is deeeelightful! Love the energy! Glad you're back. Keep it up!

great opening riff!

great opening riff!

great tune! Great energy!

great tune! Great energy!

YES! First scream was awesome! Cool composition, I think it's fairly consistent sounding, it's not necessarily bad that it changes a lot. There's no catchy bit that sticks to your brain, that could be the only downside.

The sound/mixing/mastering issue is tough since it's so loud, I have no idea how you could record it more cleanly and make it be even more impactful. Cause it sounds a bit muffled this way. But it's also quite cool, it has a dark muffled indie punk vibe. So worst case you could go with this style until you figure what you could do differently.

As for length: it feels like a good length because no part of it seems too long and boring. But if every song is in this style it can be an issue that everything is too adhd and changing too much and that becomes boring. So you just gotta feel it, and lean into it. If the sound feels like it should happen again, do it and see where it leads. Or find a good reason to make it longer or shorter. In lack of any reason go with the guts.

YES! First scream was awesome! Cool composition, I think it's fairly consistent sounding, it's not necessarily bad that it changes a lot. There's no catchy bit that sticks to your brain, that could be the only downside. The sound/mixing/mastering issue is tough since it's so loud, I have no idea how you could record it more cleanly and make it be even more impactful. Cause it sounds a bit muffled this way. But it's also quite cool, it has a dark muffled indie punk vibe. So worst case you could go with this style until you figure what you could do differently. As for length: it feels like a good length because no part of it seems too long and boring. But if every song is in this style it can be an issue that everything is too adhd and changing too much and that becomes boring. So you just gotta feel it, and lean into it. If the sound feels like it should happen again, do it and see where it leads. Or find a good reason to make it longer or shorter. In lack of any reason go with the guts.

love this, great chorus (vocals in general), drums sound awesome. looking forward to hearing more!

love this, great chorus (vocals in general), drums sound awesome. looking forward to hearing more!

Amazing punk, that is, barely comprehensible lyrics and awesome guitar.
- Spider

Amazing punk, that is, barely comprehensible lyrics and awesome guitar. - Spider

so sick! awesome panning on the vocals! very fun to listen to again and again!

so sick! awesome panning on the vocals! very fun to listen to again and again!

Rock and roll is number one!

Rock and roll is number one!

This sounds incredible

This sounds incredible

Damn, real intense punk energy on this one! Very different feel than other submissions, this sounds SO unique! Greatg job, man! Awesome to have you in this weekly beats!

Damn, real intense punk energy on this one! Very different feel than other submissions, this sounds SO unique! Greatg job, man! Awesome to have you in this weekly beats!

Thank you all so much!

[quote=rdomain]Dig that chorus. Rockin' \m/[/quote] [quote=blighters_rock]That middle section with the hand claps is deeeelightful! Love the energy! Glad you're back. Keep it up![/quote] [quote=Cow Tools]great opening riff![/quote] [quote=SQF]great tune! Great energy! [/quote] [quote=horatiuromantic]YES! First scream was awesome! Cool composition, I think it's fairly consistent sounding, it's not necessarily bad that it changes a lot. There's no catchy bit that sticks to your brain, that could be the only downside. The sound/mixing/mastering issue is tough since it's so loud, I have no idea how you could record it more cleanly and make it be even more impactful. Cause it sounds a bit muffled this way. But it's also quite cool, it has a dark muffled indie punk vibe. So worst case you could go with this style until you figure what you could do differently. As for length: it feels like a good length because no part of it seems too long and boring. But if every song is in this style it can be an issue that everything is too adhd and changing too much and that becomes boring. So you just gotta feel it, and lean into it. If the sound feels like it should happen again, do it and see where it leads. Or find a good reason to make it longer or shorter. In lack of any reason go with the guts.[/quote] [quote=nedsferatu]love this, great chorus (vocals in general), drums sound awesome. looking forward to hearing more![/quote] [quote=Devieus]Amazing punk, that is, barely comprehensible lyrics and awesome guitar. - Spider[/quote] [quote=Alphaglitch]so sick! awesome panning on the vocals! very fun to listen to again and again! [/quote] [quote=Pop Tronics]Rock and roll is number one![/quote] [quote=ineff]This sounds incredible[/quote] [quote=jegasus]Damn, real intense punk energy on this one! Very different feel than other submissions, this sounds SO unique! Greatg job, man! Awesome to have you in this weekly beats! [/quote] Thank you all so much!