love the telephone-tunnel FX on the vocals at the beginning. and a slightly detuned synth in the back? dreamy as always.

love the telephone-tunnel FX on the vocals at the beginning. and a slightly detuned synth in the back? dreamy as always.

oh shit and THAT ENDING

oh shit and THAT ENDING

Taking chances is a good look. Please keep these coming!

Taking chances is a good look. Please keep these coming!

Yo. Maisie. Maisie!! What is that riff at 2:10?!
Could be a Porcupine Tree song from the "In Absentia" era! Maybe the vocal having that radio sound and the atmosphere have something to do with that, too. So cool - but yeah, sounds like a doozy trying to get it written AND recorded in a week.

Yo. Maisie. Maisie!! What is that riff at 2:10?! :D Could be a Porcupine Tree song from the "In Absentia" era! Maybe the vocal having that radio sound and the atmosphere have something to do with that, too. So cool - but yeah, sounds like a doozy trying to get it written AND recorded in a week.

Reading the description, I was expecting way worse. It sounds OK on my headphones (I am only listening to those weekly beats and no big production, so no killer production to compare to right away)

I like that you did pull out the aggressive drums and guitars!

Fun track, you can always come back to it later if you feel it needs it.

Reading the description, I was expecting way worse. It sounds OK on my headphones (I am only listening to those weekly beats and no big production, so no killer production to compare to right away) I like that you did pull out the aggressive drums and guitars! Fun track, you can always come back to it later if you feel it needs it.

how much it opens up in the chorus. love it.
the metal edge at the end was unexpected but greatly appreciated

how much it opens up in the chorus. love it. the metal edge at the end was unexpected but greatly appreciated

bobbyyyyyyy

love that outro this is so cool

bobbyyyyyyy love that outro this is so cool

great stuff! it didn't felt like many genres, just like one song evolving over time

amazing work it ended up sounding awesome

great stuff! it didn't felt like many genres, just like one song evolving over time amazing work it ended up sounding awesome

awesome, this is that stuff they book people at roadburn for

awesome, this is that stuff they book people at roadburn for

The tension builds so nicely to the beat intro between your vocals and the guitar.  Ooof that heavy guitar sounds awesome! So good right at 2:39 \m/ Such an excellent build and release.  This feels cathartic too   Also not sure if you've seen it on YT but Matt Draper does these introspective reviews on old movies and series and he recently talked about Season 1 of Twin Peaks. here's the copy pasta https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yrX2DRw3A_A 

The tension builds so nicely to the beat intro between your vocals and the guitar. Ooof that heavy guitar sounds awesome! So good right at 2:39 \m/ Such an excellent build and release. This feels cathartic too :) Also not sure if you've seen it on YT but Matt Draper does these introspective reviews on old movies and series and he recently talked about Season 1 of Twin Peaks. here's the copy pasta https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yrX2DRw3A_A

Damn! Kicked it up a notch there towards the end with the nasty metal riffs. Can we start a band?

Damn! Kicked it up a notch there towards the end with the nasty metal riffs. Can we start a band?

slow is good
slow is our friend
slow lets us breathe

slow is good slow is our friend slow lets us breathe

this is bobby AF

i was like... how is this going to get heavy? and then KAPOW you did it  \m/

this is bobby AF i was like... how is this going to get heavy? and then KAPOW you did it \m/

Like djippy was saying. I was expecting worse with that kind of description. You set rather high standard for yourself An amazing track, and absolutely love when it got NASTY at the end. Could totally hear where that growl would have fit it!  Also agree with Cakes, love the experimental nature of this! Keep ‘em coming!

Like djippy was saying. I was expecting worse with that kind of description. You set rather high standard for yourself <3 An amazing track, and absolutely love when it got NASTY at the end. Could totally hear where that growl would have fit it! Also agree with Cakes, love the experimental nature of this! Keep ‘em coming!

It's funny getting to this after all the other comments, because as I read about the ending, it built up some hype for sure... and I think it lived up to it.  I love the little breath before that last riff, very nice touch. 

It's funny getting to this after all the other comments, because as I read about the ending, it built up some hype for sure... and I think it lived up to it. I love the little breath before that last riff, very nice touch.

Unexpected chugging at the end, hell yeah, girl. I wonder what inspired you to try the growl, and I hope to hear the result at some point!

oof, I almost forgot... ★★★★★

Unexpected chugging at the end, hell yeah, girl. I wonder what inspired you to try the growl, and I hope to hear the result at some point! oof, I almost forgot... ★★★★★

think some of this might have been ear fatigue to be honest, on listening a few days later it's sort of okay a lil muddy but it's grand like. i had been listening to it for about 3 hours straight at time of upload and perhas my sanity was lower than usual 😂

thanks so much

i love Porcupine Tree so much honestly riff just happened because my guitar was tuned to like, drop B or some bullshit 😅 thank you!

thanks so much for the kindness (: i haven't seen this yet! but i've added it to my watch list, currently in the middle of a re watch so i'll give it a view once i'm through season 1!

i hadn't ever heard of it but wow that sounds like such a fun festival!

gunna be real sad if we don't get a WB song together at some point this year 🌺

bobby is a confusing guy i think he deserves a somewhat confusing song 😂

i REALLY wanted that breath to lead into a black metal fry scream but i did not work it out in time!! left the breath in tho because it was a little bit fun

can't lie it was pretty much 100 percent rolo tomassi 😂

[quote=djippy]Reading the description, I was expecting way worse. It sounds OK on my headphones (I am only listening to those weekly beats and no big production, so no killer production to compare to right away) [/quote] [quote=Paisleyfrog]Like djippy was saying. I was expecting worse with that kind of description.[/quote] think some of this might have been ear fatigue to be honest, on listening a few days later it's sort of okay <3 a lil muddy but it's grand like. i had been listening to it for about 3 hours straight at time of upload and perhas my sanity was lower than usual 😂 thanks so much <3 [quote=LeBernd]Yo. Maisie. Maisie!! What is that riff at 2:10?! :D Could be a Porcupine Tree song from the "In Absentia" era! Maybe the vocal having that radio sound and the atmosphere have something to do with that, too. So cool - but yeah, sounds like a doozy trying to get it written AND recorded in a week.[/quote] i love Porcupine Tree so much <3 honestly riff just happened because my guitar was tuned to like, drop B or some bullshit 😅 thank you! [quote=Tone Matrix]The tension builds so nicely to the beat intro between your vocals and the guitar. Ooof that heavy guitar sounds awesome! So good right at 2:39 \m/ Such an excellent build and release. This feels cathartic too :) Also not sure if you've seen it on YT but Matt Draper does these introspective reviews on old movies and series and he recently talked about Season 1 of Twin Peaks. here's the copy pasta https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yrX2DRw3A_A [/quote] thanks so much for the kindness (: i haven't seen this yet! but i've added it to my watch list, currently in the middle of a re watch so i'll give it a view once i'm through season 1! [quote=twinningl00m]awesome, this is that stuff they book people at roadburn for[/quote] i hadn't ever heard of it but wow that sounds like such a fun festival! [quote=ViridianLoom]Damn! Kicked it up a notch there towards the end with the nasty metal riffs. Can we start a band?[/quote] gunna be real sad if we don't get a WB song together at some point this year 🌺 [quote=jwh]this is bobby AF i was like... how is this going to get heavy? and then KAPOW you did it \m/[/quote] bobby is a confusing guy i think he deserves a somewhat confusing song 😂 [quote=Napear]It's funny getting to this after all the other comments, because as I read about the ending, it built up some hype for sure... and I think it lived up to it. I love the little breath before that last riff, very nice touch. [/quote] i REALLY wanted that breath to lead into a black metal fry scream but i did not work it out in time!! left the breath in tho because it was a little bit fun <3 [quote=RPLKTR]Unexpected chugging at the end, hell yeah, girl. I wonder what inspired you to try the growl, and I hope to hear the result at some point! oof, I almost forgot... ★★★★★[/quote] can't lie it was pretty much 100 percent rolo tomassi 😂

Ugh those telephone vocals at the start sound so beautifully delicate, and then when the track opens up to your clean vocals and synths it sounds so bright and BIG!!

I think the mix sounds great, can definitely relate to ear fatigue getting me down on a mix and then listening back the next day not knowing what I was so concerned about.

Love the heavy section at the end too! That pause and then the breath into breakbeat just hits so hard.

Ugh those telephone vocals at the start sound so beautifully delicate, and then when the track opens up to your clean vocals and synths it sounds so bright and BIG!! I think the mix sounds great, can definitely relate to ear fatigue getting me down on a mix and then listening back the next day not knowing what I was so concerned about. Love the heavy section at the end too! That pause and then the breath into breakbeat just hits so hard.

Wb is fun bc you can do whatever the hell you want and nobody cares, except for the 27 ppl here!

The heavy part rocks

Wb is fun bc you can do whatever the hell you want and nobody cares, except for the 27 ppl here! The heavy part rocks

I thought it sounded polished! Love the transition from soft to very very heavy, without it sounding out of place. Great arrangement, really!

I thought it sounded polished! Love the transition from soft to very very heavy, without it sounding out of place. Great arrangement, really!

This is super lush! Amazing stuff.

This is super lush! Amazing stuff. :D

+1 this, I'd be psyched to hear a combo of your and ViridianLoom's sounds on WB!

[quote=MaisieMarra] [quote=ViridianLoom]Damn! Kicked it up a notch there towards the end with the nasty metal riffs. Can we start a band?[/quote] gunna be real sad if we don't get a WB song together at some point this year 🌺 [/quote] +1 this, I'd be psyched to hear a combo of your and ViridianLoom's sounds on WB!

I love messy weeklybeats, especially with that awesome guitar
- Ebrit

I love messy weeklybeats, especially with that awesome guitar - Ebrit