Wow, you were busy with the lyric-writing this time, weren't you? I like that the chorus goes in an unexpected melodic direction. Or, unexpected to me at least.

I like your modification of the final chorus lyrics. Double chorus impact, with lyrics that wrap the song up. Keep it up!

Wow, you were busy with the lyric-writing this time, weren't you? I like that the chorus goes in an unexpected melodic direction. Or, unexpected to me at least. I like your modification of the final chorus lyrics. Double chorus impact, with lyrics that wrap the song up. Keep it up!

Very heartfelt. How refreshing! Not where I thought you were headed (verbally) with a person in Walmart. Beautiful song yet again. I agree with the original post in that the double chorus changing does wrap up the song nicely. Looking forward to more!

Very heartfelt. How refreshing! Not where I thought you were headed (verbally) with a person in Walmart. :) Beautiful song yet again. I agree with the original post in that the double chorus changing does wrap up the song nicely. Looking forward to more!

Nice and simple. I like the lyrics.

Nice and simple. I like the lyrics. :)

i really enjoyed this and felt engaged with the story and the music throughout. nicely done

i really enjoyed this and felt engaged with the story and the music throughout. nicely done

I really liked the story you told with the lyrics, you were able to cover a lot of ground in a short amount of time and kept it interesting and enjoyable throughout

I really liked the story you told with the lyrics, you were able to cover a lot of ground in a short amount of time and kept it interesting and enjoyable throughout

This is pretty, especially the chorus. So sweet.
- Raioh

This is pretty, especially the chorus. So sweet. - Raioh