The verse is so wonderfully structured. This has the classic weekly beats thing of 'parts were rushed, I could add more' but it also captures the song just as it is formed, and it's still a wonderful thing.

The verse is so wonderfully structured. This has the classic weekly beats thing of 'parts were rushed, I could add more' but it also captures the song just as it is formed, and it's still a wonderful thing.

I love this.
If you can't say it, then sing.

I love this. If you can't say it, then sing.

<3

it does bring to mind a little bit Jim Croce's 'I'll Have To Say I Love You In A Song' but i don't think it's so similar that it's a rip off or anything.
i like your voice in this kinda laid back feel

it does bring to mind a little bit Jim Croce's 'I'll Have To Say I Love You In A Song' but i don't think it's so similar that it's a rip off or anything. i like your voice in this kinda laid back feel

Cool! Thanks for listening! I haven't heard this one before, but I find it very different. maybe only the 1 - 3m chord change and of course the topic is quite similar.

Indeed it feels good to sing this one, it's smack in the middle of my comfortable range. I have to think about that.

Thanks for the appreciation! Yeah... You gotta do something, it's better than nothing!

Haha, yes! Classic WB move, but temporary solutions like this tend to become permanent. Still, I think playing it a few times live will chisel the rough edges and maybe lead into making some kinda 3rd verse or better transition back after the chorus. I already feel like I wanna come back to the verse after the chorus, just because of the structure, altho I don't know what to say for a 3rd verse, and repeating the first doesn't seem right...

[quote=jwh]it does bring to mind a little bit Jim Croce's 'I'll Have To Say I Love You In A Song' but i don't think it's so similar that it's a rip off or anything. i like your voice in this kinda laid back feel[/quote] Cool! Thanks for listening! I haven't heard this one before, but I find it very different. maybe only the 1 - 3m chord change and of course the topic is quite similar. Indeed it feels good to sing this one, it's smack in the middle of my comfortable range. I have to think about that. [quote=DESLRV]I love this. If you can't say it, then sing.[/quote] Thanks for the appreciation! Yeah... You gotta do something, it's better than nothing! [quote=alonemusic]The verse is so wonderfully structured. This has the classic weekly beats thing of 'parts were rushed, I could add more' but it also captures the song just as it is formed, and it's still a wonderful thing.[/quote] Haha, yes! Classic WB move, but temporary solutions like this tend to become permanent. Still, I think playing it a few times live will chisel the rough edges and maybe lead into making some kinda 3rd verse or better transition back after the chorus. I already feel like I wanna come back to the verse after the chorus, just because of the structure, altho I don't know what to say for a 3rd verse, and repeating the first doesn't seem right...

I can imagine you doing a duet with Kermit The Frog on this one! delightful

I can imagine you doing a duet with Kermit The Frog on this one! delightful

Feelings like this make more sense in a less polished environment. That said, I love how peaceful and earnest this is, and your front & centre vocals stand out from the gentle guitar just right.

Feelings like this make more sense in a less polished environment. That said, I love how peaceful and earnest this is, and your front & centre vocals stand out from the gentle guitar just right.

It feels familiar to me too, but not because I think you "stole" anything, just like this song has a familiar cozy vibe somehow

It feels familiar to me too, but not because I think you "stole" anything, just like this song has a familiar cozy vibe somehow

Nice, with a classic feel.

Nice, with a classic feel.

such a sweet song! very honest. I love the spring reverb coming out more clearly at times

such a sweet song! very honest. I love the spring reverb coming out more clearly at times

haha thank you! Love Kermie!

That's true! but if you listen to like Shirley Horn you can hear some thing like this that's very polished and yet very deep and soulful and sensitive and touching and intimate ....... she's great!

Nice! Thanks for checking! I guess it means it's just a catchy song!

Yea!!! thanks!

Thank you! yea it was a little tough to write but it always feels good to put some of these thoughts into music.

spring reverb is such a vibe!

[quote=fetalface]I can imagine you doing a duet with Kermit The Frog on this one! delightful[/quote] haha thank you! Love Kermie! [quote=MRDRCAT]Feelings like this make more sense in a less polished environment. That said, I love how peaceful and earnest this is, and your front & centre vocals stand out from the gentle guitar just right.[/quote] That's true! but if you listen to like Shirley Horn you can hear some thing like this that's very polished and yet very deep and soulful and sensitive and touching and intimate ....... she's great! [quote=Minnamari]It feels familiar to me too, but not because I think you "stole" anything, just like this song has a familiar cozy vibe somehow [/quote] Nice! Thanks for checking! I guess it means it's just a catchy song! [quote=Kedbreak136]Nice, with a classic feel.[/quote] Yea!!! thanks! [quote=Pescadito]such a sweet song! very honest. I love the spring reverb coming out more clearly at times[/quote] Thank you! yea it was a little tough to write but it always feels good to put some of these thoughts into music. spring reverb is such a vibe!