Cool song! I feel it would work even better with a full band setup! I hear tons of cool drums break and fun bass lines there!

Rock on!

Cool song! I feel it would work even better with a full band setup! I hear tons of cool drums break and fun bass lines there! Rock on!

Yes i was thinking the same thing. I like this stripped down version, but i can imagine an alternative version where all the instruments kick-in. For instance at 1:49 after the guitar buildup, to give a second breath to the track and get it running and running and running (with a fade out at the end). It does capture the late 90s punk vibe.

[quote=djippy]Cool song! I feel it would work even better with a full band setup! I hear tons of cool drums break and fun bass lines there! Rock on! [/quote] Yes i was thinking the same thing. I like this stripped down version, but i can imagine an alternative version where all the instruments kick-in. For instance at 1:49 after the guitar buildup, to give a second breath to the track and get it running and running and running (with a fade out at the end). It does capture the late 90s punk vibe.

this "lovers lament crap" has a nice ring to it, (chef's kiss)

this "lovers lament crap" has a nice ring to it, (chef's kiss)

I really liked this a lot! The lyrics are really well written. I was expecting a bunch more instruments to kick in at some point, but honestly as the song went on I'm glad you didn't go that route. There's something about the one guitar and the voice together that makes the longing come through more strongly. I also really like the story arc. I was pretty surprised by the second verse because I thought this was going to be a song of unrequited love, and then it went hopeful there and I thought that was really cool because most songs don't go that route, but then you went back the other direction! Kind of like life sometimes I suppose. Really well done, I think this may be one of my favorites of yours this year!

I really liked this a lot! The lyrics are really well written. I was expecting a bunch more instruments to kick in at some point, but honestly as the song went on I'm glad you didn't go that route. There's something about the one guitar and the voice together that makes the longing come through more strongly. I also really like the story arc. I was pretty surprised by the second verse because I thought this was going to be a song of unrequited love, and then it went hopeful there and I thought that was really cool because most songs don't go that route, but then you went back the other direction! Kind of like life sometimes I suppose. Really well done, I think this may be one of my favorites of yours this year!

I like melodic lines on this one. Keeps it fresh so despite the repetition in the chord progression. I also like when a phrase takes on different meaning each time it is repeated like that. Nice one. 

I like melodic lines on this one. Keeps it fresh so despite the repetition in the chord progression. I also like when a phrase takes on different meaning each time it is repeated like that. Nice one.

How come my guitar doesn't have all those chords on it? I'm gonna have to take it back I guess. Great song!

How come my guitar doesn't have all those chords on it? I'm gonna have to take it back I guess. Great song!

Ooh that bridge!!! Lovers lament crap lol

Ooh that bridge!!! Lovers lament crap lol

so catchy, and love the confidence coming through

so catchy, and love the confidence coming through

It says a lot when a single electric guitar and your vocals are enough to carry an entire song. Nice *jazzy* chord changes in that bridge too

It says a lot when a single electric guitar and your vocals are enough to carry an entire song. Nice *jazzy* chord changes in that bridge too :)