I've always massively respected your ability to carry an entire tune with just an acoustic guitar and your voice. Really great vocal hooks here and I relate to the lyrics. Hope you have tomorrow off since it's labor day, get up early on Tuesday instead ☺️

I've always massively respected your ability to carry an entire tune with just an acoustic guitar and your voice. Really great vocal hooks here and I relate to the lyrics. Hope you have tomorrow off since it's labor day, get up early on Tuesday instead ☺️

Really nice tune. Even though you said not focused on production, it still sounds great .
Hope you find that peace ✌️

Really nice tune. Even though you said not focused on production, it still sounds great . Hope you find that peace ✌️

I love how the melody you sing keeps rising into, and even above and beyond, this nostalgic power that plays so beautifully from your heartstrings… and the lyrics got this vulnerability that resonates with any listener’s heartstrings(have i mentioned ‘heartstrings’ enough? tis a song full of heartstrings… like a network of heartstrings resonating with the ultimate empathic power )… so brilliantly beautiful

I love how the melody you sing keeps rising into, and even above and beyond, this nostalgic power that plays so beautifully from your heartstrings… and the lyrics got this vulnerability that resonates with any listener’s heartstrings(have i mentioned ‘heartstrings’ enough? :lol: tis a song full of heartstrings… like a network of heartstrings resonating with the ultimate empathic power :D)… so brilliantly beautiful <3

Mission accomplished. 

Also: keep the IV minor if you want to.

[quote=blighters_rock]so I figured it was time to write a real song[/quote] Mission accomplished. Also: keep the IV minor if you want to. :P

Simple but effective, well done.
Take care.
- Spider

Simple but effective, well done. Take care. - Spider

Beautiful and I can relate...

I sometimes call days off when I am down, and it happens too often.

Acoustic guitar is very well recorded. Hope you can leave in peace most of the time! That electric guitar solo is great.

Beautiful and I can relate... I sometimes call days off when I am down, and it happens too often. Acoustic guitar is very well recorded. Hope you can leave in peace most of the time! That electric guitar solo is great.