Nice dude, cool to hear your pop-rock sensibilities in isolation. The vocal harmonies on every 2nd line are a nice touch, the heavy riff is a good hook too. And lyrically I like the little "Once, twice, third" word play. Final verse has a nice build up to round things out. All in all, good output this week!

Nice dude, cool to hear your pop-rock sensibilities in isolation. The vocal harmonies on every 2nd line are a nice touch, the heavy riff is a good hook too. And lyrically I like the little "Once, twice, third" word play. Final verse has a nice build up to round things out. All in all, good output this week!

Awesome man!  Very well produced.  Digging the vocal harmonies, well done!

Awesome man! Very well produced. Digging the vocal harmonies, well done!

I like this heavy riff at 0:45 and good sound as well. Good job on the vocals as well!

I like this heavy riff at 0:45 and good sound as well. Good job on the vocals as well!

Glad you caught the wordplay! Fun to take a cliché and try to twist it around into something new

Thanks, Mr. Foo! Trying to keep finding deficiencies in my production and level up.

Thanks much, I appreciate it. Vocals aren't my forte, but I'm trying to push myself to improve

[quote=ViridianLoom]Nice dude, cool to hear your pop-rock sensibilities in isolation. The vocal harmonies on every 2nd line are a nice touch, the heavy riff is a good hook too. And lyrically I like the little "Once, twice, third" word play. Final verse has a nice build up to round things out. All in all, good output this week![/quote] Glad you caught the wordplay! Fun to take a cliché and try to twist it around into something new [quote=Chrisfoo]Awesome man! Very well produced. Digging the vocal harmonies, well done![/quote] Thanks, Mr. Foo! Trying to keep finding deficiencies in my production and level up. [quote=Kedbreak136]I like this heavy riff at 0:45 and good sound as well. Good job on the vocals as well! [/quote] Thanks much, I appreciate it. Vocals aren't my forte, but I'm trying to push myself to improve

wait vocals aren't your forte and they are this good?

dang!  awesome track

lol, i just got the title - my man's got JOKES

wait vocals aren't your forte and they are this good? dang! awesome track lol, i just got the title - my man's got JOKES :)

Except for those weekly beats, I NEVER sing... you are doing pretty good .

Except for those weekly beats, I NEVER sing... you are doing pretty good :).