Came back, because I really liked the first track that I was presented with (by the algorithm or whatever). I like it, its main line stays in my western brain, but bc. you asked for some critical assessment w.r.t. your mix: please consider placing your vocals more prominently. It seems you’ve got a characteristic voice, with all the vulnerability going along with it. The piece could be much more memorable if you dare.

Came back, because I really liked the first track that I was presented with (by the algorithm or whatever). I like it, its main line stays in my western brain, but bc. you asked for some critical assessment w.r.t. your mix: please consider placing your vocals more prominently. It seems you’ve got a characteristic voice, with all the vulnerability going along with it. The piece could be much more memorable if you dare.

Yeah, the choice of fx is fun on the vocals, but it really feels disconnected from the rest of the track that is way more dry.

Interesting track anyways!

SO SWEET, but there is nothing like the real thing... Sugar!

Yeah, the choice of fx is fun on the vocals, but it really feels disconnected from the rest of the track that is way more dry. Interesting track anyways! SO SWEET, but there is nothing like the real thing... Sugar!

I'd call this sugary sweet, but that is specifically not what it is.
So I'll call it cheesy.
- Valx

I'd call this sugary sweet, but that is specifically not what it is. So I'll call it cheesy. - Valx

I like this a lot - agreed, it’s different that your other tracks. Agreed with funk17, I’d love to hear your vocals a bit more prominently in this track - there’s an honesty to them that I’d like to hear more clearly.

I like this a lot - agreed, it’s different that your other tracks. Agreed with funk17, I’d love to hear your vocals a bit more prominently in this track - there’s an honesty to them that I’d like to hear more clearly.