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This track is like those old milk cartons you used to get before the nice twist-top things now: it was really hard to get into, brute-forced it and subsequently ended up with a mess. But I do like the ideas and the chords, just topped and tailed it and got it out the door.
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Much like those old cartons, I didn't have any issue with this at all.
Those slight bends in the bass are really fun. The broken chords are interesting, a lot of tonal and pitch variations make that sound cool. I'd consider what variations you could add in the middle of the phrases - maybe a few grace notes as fills or some changes in the bass. I think my favorite sound is the vox-like sound, you could make a track that uses that as a feature by itself.
Those slight bends in the bass are really fun. The broken chords are interesting, a lot of tonal and pitch variations make that sound cool. I'd consider what variations you could add in the middle of the phrases - maybe a few grace notes as fills or some changes in the bass. I think my favorite sound is the vox-like sound, you could make a track that uses that as a feature by itself.
Cheers for the constructive feedback. I honestly can't say I understood everything you said, for me making music is several parts intuition and inspiration, tend to see how things pan out rather than plan them. This one was a bit of a struggle, it was only a few bars for a fair while and I had to really stretch my brain to extend it out to what it became.
