It's more than something. It's a lovely jam. Keep it up!

It's more than something. It's a lovely jam. Keep it up!

Nice and mellow, a brief moment of reprieve.

Nice and mellow, a brief moment of reprieve.

Yeah, I like it. Makes me imagine a beach

Yeah, I like it. Makes me imagine a beach

thanks for that input! you've made me realize i don't think enough about general feel when listening to my own tracks, i get too caught up with the technicals and theory of the harmony+melody

[quote=TomAdamsAbsent]Yeah, I like it. Makes me imagine a beach [/quote] thanks for that input! you've made me realize i don't think enough about general feel when listening to my own tracks, i get too caught up with the technicals and theory of the harmony+melody

Thanks, hopefully the free time contributed to that. you post some really creative songs, what's the first thing that comes to mind that you think is missing from a scratch track like this?

[quote=Devieus]Nice and mellow, a brief moment of reprieve.[/quote] Thanks, hopefully the free time contributed to that. you post some really creative songs, what's the first thing that comes to mind that you think is missing from a scratch track like this?

Thanks! I do like the idea, but i think its missing a few things and somewhere to go

[quote=User Agent]It's more than something. It's a lovely jam. Keep it up![/quote] Thanks! I do like the idea, but i think its missing a few things and somewhere to go

As a lounge song, it's not really missing a whole lot other than an ending. As a jazz song, drums. As lofi, a high pass filter. If you're asking what I would add to it, what I personally think it's missing, I would have to go with a square wave.

[quote=underground Luau][quote=Devieus]Nice and mellow, a brief moment of reprieve.[/quote] Thanks, hopefully the free time contributed to that. you post some really creative songs, what's the first thing that comes to mind that you think is missing from a scratch track like this?[/quote]As a lounge song, it's not really missing a whole lot other than an ending. As a jazz song, drums. As lofi, a high pass filter. If you're asking what I would add to it, what I personally think it's missing, I would have to go with a square wave.

sounds like something that would be in a wes anderson movie or something along those lines.  im really into the second half of the song.  ( great riff in first half no doubt)

sounds like something that would be in a wes anderson movie or something along those lines. im really into the second half of the song. ( great riff in first half no doubt)

Lovely little ditty.  Very enjoyable.

Lovely little ditty. Very enjoyable.

Oooh gorgeous! Sometimes the last minute weekly beats end up being real gems. This is super nice. I love how the second section is contextualised by the first. Feels like a lovely, thematically connected scene change.

Oooh gorgeous! Sometimes the last minute weekly beats end up being real gems. This is super nice. I love how the second section is contextualised by the first. Feels like a lovely, thematically connected scene change.

Very nice! Quite cinematic in it's own way.

Very nice! Quite cinematic in it's own way.

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always appreciate your input devieus

though i'm personally not a fan of his brand of quirk, i can certainly appreciate his craft, thank you!

thanks!

its true, i also find the less time you spend on a song agonizing over small details, the lower you build up unrealistic expectations. thanks for the thoughtful comment

thank you!

[quote=Devieus][quote=underground Luau][quote=Devieus]Nice and mellow, a brief moment of reprieve.[/quote] Thanks, hopefully the free time contributed to that. you post some really creative songs, what's the first thing that comes to mind that you think is missing from a scratch track like this?[/quote]As a lounge song, it's not really missing a whole lot other than an ending. As a jazz song, drums. As lofi, a high pass filter. If you're asking what I would add to it, what I personally think it's missing, I would have to go with a square wave.[/quote] always appreciate your input devieus [quote=demonzor]sounds like something that would be in a wes anderson movie or something along those lines. im really into the second half of the song. ( great riff in first half no doubt)[/quote] though i'm personally not a fan of his brand of quirk, i can certainly appreciate his craft, thank you! [quote=rdomain]Lovely little ditty. Very enjoyable.[/quote] thanks! [quote=Simon Koehn]Oooh gorgeous! Sometimes the last minute weekly beats end up being real gems. This is super nice. I love how the second section is contextualised by the first. Feels like a lovely, thematically connected scene change.[/quote] its true, i also find the less time you spend on a song agonizing over small details, the lower you build up unrealistic expectations. thanks for the thoughtful comment [quote=Plantrain]Very nice! Quite cinematic in it's own way.[/quote] thank you! [quote=kaedo sevaada][img]https://media.giphy.com/media/26BkLyDcbBJ8lTBS0/giphy.gif[/img][/quote]