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Ten Feet Too Far

By Tom Foolery on March 8, 2026 5:29 am

Another very very busy week with Interrupt Festival on here. I have managed to find 4 free hours this Sunday afternoon to get this track out! Another slowcore attempt. I think the verses have worked out really well, however the choruses have ended up sounding a little bit Weezer-ish (not necessarily a bad thing but not quite what I was going for).

The big learning this week was that I finally adjusted my soundcard so that I have basically no latency when recording into Ableton!! Now I can play my guitar into effects chains live!!! I have been making great use of all the amp sims, rather than having to use the ones built into the soundcard (which are a bit less flexible and baked in once recorded). Who would have thought!

It's been an interesting week.

On a personal level, things have been very good. My knee is starting to feel more like it used to on longer runs, I've been enjoying riding my bike and took the long scenic route to work, my girlfriend's cat fell asleep on my chest (which is rare even for her), and it has been lovely catching up with old friends at Interrupt. I feel excited about trackers again after seeing some incredible sets (all of them were amazing but Harley absolutely blew my mind with his gameboys, and Azuria Sky's set had such a huge dynamic and emotional range, and reminded me that electronic music can be both danceable and moving, really really good stuff). Idk if this means I will be reaching for a gameboy anytime soon though, I'm enjoying the guitars a lot. It was also a very inspiring week going through other people's weeklybeats, and I got so much lovely feedback on last week too which was really encouraging.

The news has been grim though. I thought about trying to get my thoughts out into lyrics or music, but the whole thing feels too big. I've been talking about it amongst friends and colleagues, and we are all in disbelief. It feels surreal to see the "rules-based order" completely thrown out the window. And for what?? It's been consistently stirring through my mind.

Anyway, that felt too big to put into a song, and as I was running out of time, I wrote a song about yearning instead.
It feels shallow but it took my mind off things, and maybe it will for you too.



I can't stop looking at her
she just looks so serene
the way she moves so freely
cartwheels across my dreams

I can't make my way to her
My legs become the floor
10 feet too far
10 feet too far

The ink that marks her shoulder
Imprints into my brain
My knees feel weak beneath me
Could I stand so much to gain

I can't make my way to her
My legs become the floor
10 feet too far
10 feet too far

My head floats in the clouds
It's easy to pretend
Why shoot to be a star
When daydreams never end

my legs become the floor

!!!

so glad you are making and sharing this music.
and yeah, very much relate to the thoughts you shared. heart

Rock yeah!

love the distorted guitars.

I am not sure if just an export error, but maybe you should leave just a bar more with cymbal - guitar ringing at the end? It stops pretty abruptly!

Great track.

The verses are nice and the guitar sounds huge coming in on the chorus.  I can see the Weezer comparison, but you really can't go wrong with a quiet verse loud chorus and it's accomplished effectively here.  Thanks for helping take my mind off the state of the world for a couple minutes.

I really like the guitar tone on this. Makes me want a squealing noise solo at the end. smile
Very impressive work. Can't believe people can just bang these out in a couple of hours.

masterfully done! awesome lyrics and playing and dynamics. lots of talk in the comments at Paisleyfrog's tune this week, about dynamics and making a chorus feel really big. I feel like this track actually goes further in that regard. Different styles tho, but still. I guess your guitars are more sharp and cut through the mix, they bury the drums a bit more, yet the bass cuts thru as well. very very cool production. I may also just be more partial to your poetic lyrics, and anyway it's not to compare tracks or anything, but thought it would be interesting to investigate the different approaches.
their track: https://weeklybeats.com/paisleyfrog/music/finding-my-way-home

that chorus did come out weezeresque; i think it's the guitars?? i love it either way, they are slowcore at heart heart verses came out beautiful, and for four hours in one sitting? you should be doubly proud. glad you enjoyed interrupt too; Azuria makes the most beautiful music heart



This is awesome! Definitely Weezer in the chorus, but not a bad thing at all. I really like how you emphasized the loud soft by making your verse so delicate. It makes the contrast that much better. Great mix as well, and definitely love the poetry of the lyrics - that’s mainly what I felt mine were missing, some of that vibrant imagery. “My legs become the floor”. Elevates the song.

Fantastic work, need to listen a few more times on good headphones smile

Heck yeah! Especially love the chorus!

Loving the sound of that opening guitar line on the verse.  Also as a blue album lover, i'm totally for that chorus! \m/ Such a sing-a-long feel to this!  Congrats on the ableton latency triumph too!

Damn, how many of us are writing rock songs lately. This is really great. Love the chorus, excellent energy.

Another impressive track! I love the contrast between the soft verses (great vocal delivery here) and the energetic chorus. Great lyrics as usual.

awe - the world needs more romance - this is delightful heart

jwh wrote:

my legs become the floor

!!!

so glad you are making and sharing this music.
and yeah, very much relate to the thoughts you shared. heart

Thank you! I wasn't sure about that line, it's nice to know you found it noteworthy!

djippy wrote:

Rock yeah!

love the distorted guitars.

I am not sure if just an export error, but maybe you should leave just a bar more with cymbal - guitar ringing at the end? It stops pretty abruptly!

Great track.

Ahhh yes you are absolutely right, it is meant to ring out a bit at the end! I guess I was in too much of a rush...
Thank you for giving your feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Cosmic Cairns wrote:

The verses are nice and the guitar sounds huge coming in on the chorus.  I can see the Weezer comparison, but you really can't go wrong with a quiet verse loud chorus and it's accomplished effectively here.  Thanks for helping take my mind off the state of the world for a couple minutes.

Thank you! I agree, a quiet verse and loud chorus is a tried and tested approach. Very happy to hear it took your mind off things.

Homeostatic wrote:

I really like the guitar tone on this. Makes me want a squealing noise solo at the end. smile
Very impressive work. Can't believe people can just bang these out in a couple of hours.

Thank you! I wish I could play a squealing noise solo over the top of it, but not quiiiiite yet for me.
Thanks for listening!

horatiuromantic wrote:

masterfully done! awesome lyrics and playing and dynamics. lots of talk in the comments at Paisleyfrog's tune this week, about dynamics and making a chorus feel really big. I feel like this track actually goes further in that regard. Different styles tho, but still. I guess your guitars are more sharp and cut through the mix, they bury the drums a bit more, yet the bass cuts thru as well. very very cool production. I may also just be more partial to your poetic lyrics, and anyway it's not to compare tracks or anything, but thought it would be interesting to investigate the different approaches.
their track: https://weeklybeats.com/paisleyfrog/music/finding-my-way-home

Thank you for sharing Paisleyfrog's track! It was interesting to see how we both implemented the quiet loud quiet loud formula. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece and flattered that you liked the lyrics!!

MaisieMarra wrote:

that chorus did come out weezeresque; i think it's the guitars?? i love it either way, they are slowcore at heart heart verses came out beautiful, and for four hours in one sitting? you should be doubly proud. glad you enjoyed interrupt too; Azuria makes the most beautiful music heart

Never thought of weezer being slowcore at heart but I'm gonna back you on this one. Thanks for your kind words!!

Paisleyfrog wrote:

This is awesome! Definitely Weezer in the chorus, but not a bad thing at all. I really like how you emphasized the loud soft by making your verse so delicate. It makes the contrast that much better. Great mix as well, and definitely love the poetry of the lyrics - that’s mainly what I felt mine were missing, some of that vibrant imagery. “My legs become the floor”. Elevates the song.

Fantastic work, need to listen a few more times on good headphones smile

Thank you very much! I really enjoyed your track too, and it was fun to discuss our approaches with you smile
Also very flattered that you found that line noteworthy, it's nice to receive feedback like that on my lyrics.

b bro wrote:

Heck yeah! Especially love the chorus!

Thanks bbro!!

Tone Matrix wrote:

Loving the sound of that opening guitar line on the verse.  Also as a blue album lover, i'm totally for that chorus! \m/ Such a sing-a-long feel to this!  Congrats on the ableton latency triumph too!

Blue album is a great album!!!
Thanks for your kind words, and thanks on the congratulations - I really felt like I'd conquered ableton then ahaha

0F wrote:

Damn, how many of us are writing rock songs lately. This is really great. Love the chorus, excellent energy.

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Low-key rock is making a comeback in 2026 you heard it here first.

qp wrote:

Another impressive track! I love the contrast between the soft verses (great vocal delivery here) and the energetic chorus. Great lyrics as usual.

Thank you qp, very flattered by your kind words about my lyrics. Thanks for listening!

emily wrote:

awe - the world needs more romance - this is delightful heart

Agreed, never enough romance in the world heart Thank you emily!

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