I like the vox at 2:20, good job

I like the vox at 2:20, good job

The beat is super representative of The Slog. Feeling it. Hope you're not as down as the singer here.

The beat is super representative of The Slog. Feeling it. Hope you're not as down as the singer here.

The lyrics are chilling against that dark track.
That said, once you find a way to float away, by all means clue me in

The lyrics are chilling against that dark track. That said, once you find a way to float away, by all means clue me in

Thank you!

I'm in a good headspace, thanks! But sometimes those shadows creep up!

Therapy helps, ha ha

[quote=dadboy]I like the vox at 2:20, good job[/quote] Thank you! [quote=LeBernd]The beat is super representative of The Slog. Feeling it. Hope you're not as down as the singer here.[/quote] I'm in a good headspace, thanks! But sometimes those shadows creep up! [quote=MRDRCAT]The lyrics are chilling against that dark track. That said, once you find a way to float away, by all means clue me in[/quote] Therapy helps, ha ha

well said! had a depressing day reading the news in general... people threatening and often taking other people's freedom.
the beat is cool. I liked the composition too, all the sections seem coherent.

as for some feedback on the vocals, when u are ready for it, don't be afraid to push it harder - sing a bit louder, more diaphragm, more power, u def have it in you and it will sound better and be more fun to do it (tho it's scary AF in the beginning. speaking from experience). singing loud will make you feel more FREEDOM ;D of course it is also a matter of taste and u will find your own way into it but yea give it a try sometimes...

well said! had a depressing day reading the news in general... people threatening and often taking other people's freedom. the beat is cool. I liked the composition too, all the sections seem coherent. as for some feedback on the vocals, when u are ready for it, don't be afraid to push it harder - sing a bit louder, more diaphragm, more power, u def have it in you and it will sound better and be more fun to do it (tho it's scary AF in the beginning. speaking from experience). singing loud will make you feel more FREEDOM ;D of course it is also a matter of taste and u will find your own way into it but yea give it a try sometimes...