So well orchestrated, and your voice sounds great the way you mixed it within the space

So well orchestrated, and your voice sounds great the way you mixed it within the space <3

I can't quite make out the lyrics, but I like the vocal melody and flow you have going on. The broken up lead guitar sound is really nice. I like how the arrangement keeps moving, adding and removing things to keep it fresh.

I can't quite make out the lyrics, but I like the vocal melody and flow you have going on. The broken up lead guitar sound is really nice. I like how the arrangement keeps moving, adding and removing things to keep it fresh.

I agree with this feedback. I think you could roll back on the reverb a bit for more lyrical clarity. The rest of your mix is decent though. The track as a whole has a strong resemblance to Joy Division's sonic style. Nice melodies and structure!

[quote=blighters_rock]I can't quite make out the lyrics...[/quote] I agree with this feedback. I think you could roll back on the reverb a bit for more lyrical clarity. The rest of your mix is decent though. The track as a whole has a strong resemblance to Joy Division's sonic style. Nice melodies and structure!

I think with a little more finessing you would have a very good vocal production technique here, everything else sounds perfect already. The song itself is well-written, I wouldn’t have even noticed it was the same progression throughout. Great job!

I think with a little more finessing you would have a very good vocal production technique here, everything else sounds perfect already. The song itself is well-written, I wouldn’t have even noticed it was the same progression throughout. Great job!

Ooh love that intro. Reminds me of Bleachers a bit

Ooh love that intro. Reminds me of Bleachers a bit

thanks for the feedback, I agree and I've tried recently to be a bit more realistic with vocals.

[quote=ENC_][quote=blighters_rock]I can't quite make out the lyrics...[/quote] I agree with this feedback. I think you could roll back on the reverb a bit for more lyrical clarity. The rest of your mix is decent though. The track as a whole has a strong resemblance to Joy Division's sonic style. Nice melodies and structure! [/quote] thanks for the feedback, I agree and I've tried recently to be a bit more realistic with vocals.

thanks for all the feedback, it's super useful to get this and try and progress. Sometimes though the week just disappears and you get what you get

[quote=Sodabelly]I think with a little more finessing you would have a very good vocal production technique here, everything else sounds perfect already. The song itself is well-written, I wouldn’t have even noticed it was the same progression throughout. Great job![/quote] [quote=prophisee]Ooh love that intro. Reminds me of Bleachers a bit[/quote] [quote=RajaTheResidentAlien]So well orchestrated, and your voice sounds great the way you mixed it within the space <3[/quote] [quote=blighters_rock]I can't quite make out the lyrics, but I like the vocal melody and flow you have going on. The broken up lead guitar sound is really nice. I like how the arrangement keeps moving, adding and removing things to keep it fresh.[/quote] thanks for all the feedback, it's super useful to get this and try and progress. Sometimes though the week just disappears and you get what you get :)