First off: Welcome to Weeklybeats and congratulations on your first finished track!

I can understand the other listeners' opinions about the talking, but I didn't see it that way.  The amount that's appropriate depends on your expectations―if you came in primed for something along the lines of Negativland's "Guns", this would have waaaay too much music.

Impressive... I don't think I've seen someone attain enlightenment on their first track before.   That's the way to get stuff done―welcome to your new life of being incredibly productive.

Looking forward to see what you'll do next.  (Those samples are great, btw―they got me interested in watching the source documentary.) 

First off: Welcome to Weeklybeats and congratulations on your [i]first finished track[/i]! I can understand the other listeners' opinions about the talking, but I didn't see it that way. The amount that's appropriate depends on your expectations―if you came in primed for something along the lines of [url=https://youtu.be/dGF5Pte3TKs]Negativland's "Guns"[/url], this would have waaaay too much music. :P [quote=perman00b]I think they're probably right, but I've been to buried in getting this finished up to think about it too much. I'll save that for a future revision.[/quote] Impressive... I don't think I've seen someone attain enlightenment on their first track before. :P That's the way to get stuff done―welcome to your new life of being incredibly productive. :cool: Looking forward to see what you'll do next. (Those samples are great, btw―they got me interested in watching the source documentary.)

Nice cheesy dialogue! The beat is pretty legit, it's ready for a party! Also interested in this Daphne now

Nice cheesy dialogue! The beat is pretty legit, it's ready for a party! Also interested in this Daphne now :)

@ineff Thank you for the kind welcome and the thoughtful response!

Ha! What you call enlightenment is decades of being a creative professional. Collecting and interpreting feedback and prioritizing changes comes with the territory.

LOL, thanks! Glad to have sparked some interest in her. I found that BBC segment via @synth_history on IG.

@ineff Thank you for the kind welcome and the thoughtful response! [quote=ineff]I don't think I've seen someone attain enlightenment on their first track before.[/quote] Ha! What you call enlightenment is decades of being a creative professional. Collecting and interpreting feedback and prioritizing changes comes with the territory. [quote=horatiuromantic]Nice cheesy dialogue! The beat is pretty legit, it's ready for a party! Also interested in this Daphne now[/quote] LOL, thanks! Glad to have sparked some interest in her. I found that BBC segment via @synth_history on IG.

Welcome to the gang
I don't know about too much talking, vocals are like an instrument on their own, and you're playing the samples well enough
- Ebrit

Welcome to the gang I don't know about too much talking, vocals are like an instrument on their own, and you're playing the samples well enough - Ebrit

Welcome and Congrats on getting a solid track completed and out there! This sounds great(that AnalogHeat is no joke, it'll make anything sound so succulent: i totally want one )... i think the vocals take a lead in the spotlight which isn't too much nor a bad thing at all, considering it gives a good tribute to Daphne Oram

Welcome and Congrats on getting a solid track completed and out there! This sounds great(that AnalogHeat is no joke, it'll make anything sound so succulent: i totally want one :D)... i think the vocals take a lead in the spotlight which isn't too much nor a bad thing at all, considering it gives a good tribute to Daphne Oram <3