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Vicki Says

By Paisleyfrog on August 25, 2024 8:35 pm

Gothic metal still wasn't in the cards due to both time and energy levels, so that one's getting pushed back one more week.

Last week was a LOT of fun though, and had me wanting to do more feel-good rock. It also had me thinking more about speak-singers, which sort of seems to fit with my voice.

Based on the title, you might think that this is another Lou Reed song (along the lines of Lisa Says, Stephanie Says, Candi Says, etc). You would be mistaken: this is a Cars-influenced song! This song was a ton of fun to put together - there's a lot of Cars tropes in here. The chorus is maybe a little close to Bye Bye Love, but hell, bye the time they got to Move Like This, Ric was copying himself, too.

Oddly enough, lyrics came about very early in the process - early enough that I actually named the project with the title. This doesn’t happen very often. First line was “Vicki says she’s lonely”, and the whole thing built from there. 

Sound stuff: More work with keyboard session players. Using the block chord player and then putting a monosynth on that track gives a very human sounding arp effect. Other effects are just me a bunch of times (four layers on the bg vocals, handclaps are five layers).

› Lyrics

I don't really know Cars so well, that said it sounds as though this was a fun one to produce.  The synth work was a great addition, gave the song a...summer feel maybe. Also, #notloureed made me laugh more than it should have

Has that nice classic feel reminiscent of a top-down highway cruise on a perfect summer day in the early 2000s. Solid execution of the feel-good rock. All the layers and effects came together really since for a fun, cohesive track. Awesome upload!

Your vocals sound awesome!  Maybe I'm still on my Traveling Wilburys kick but I got some Tom Petty feels in there too.  Def hear that Cars rhythm influence and clapping along to the beat.  This feels like it was taken out of a time capsule.  The chorus is super catchy with the harmonies.  "feelin so lonely!" \m/

I love it!! I definitely heard the Cars influence right away (the handclaps & that synth...come on), but agree with Tone Matrix that there's a good and welcome dollop of Traveling Wilburys. The whole thing smacks of 80s top-40, for real. The production is clean! Those claps sound nice and crackly and the guitar sits perfectly. You are really showcasing your vocals well! Once you're done with your industrial album, your Gothic metal album, and your folk album, I'd love an 80s summer rock album. You know, since you're taking requests...
Also, "Move Like This" is SO GOOD - Ric knew exactly what to swipe from Early Ric. wink

The funny thing is that I barely know The Cars but within 30 seconds my brain said "hey this sounds like The Cars". It's such a fun track and your vocals are absolutely fantastic and SO FUN.

I have only one concern and it may be an artifact of these AirPods I'm using - but the claps seem really really loud every now and then, to the point where I wonder if they're clipping? It really caught me off guard. Again, might just be my listening tools.

Great track!

I like that you're riding the feel good rock wave!

Hearing Bowie again. Interesting thoughts on the speak singers!
The first transition from synth lead to guitar was unexpected turn, but in a good way.
This was a fun one!

lament.config wrote:

I don't really know Cars so well, that said it sounds as though this was a fun one to produce.  The synth work was a great addition, gave the song a...summer feel maybe. Also, #notloureed made me laugh more than it should have

One must always specify when something is Not Lou Reed. big_smile big_smile

Totally agree, The Cars have such a summer sound to them. A triangle monosynth lead is a signature sound of theirs, but I've always loved all of Greg Hawke's synth work - accenting and filling in, and sharing the soundstage equally with the guitars.

littlebigmosaic wrote:

Has that nice classic feel reminiscent of a top-down highway cruise on a perfect summer day in the early 2000s. Solid execution of the feel-good rock. All the layers and effects came together really since for a fun, cohesive track. Awesome upload!

Thanks! It was funny to me at first that you said early 2000s, because to me The Cars are definitive 80s. But you're ABSOLUTELY right! Ric Ocasek's signature was all over rock during that time - both as a producer, and because of all the bands that grew up listening to the Cars smile

Tone Matrix wrote:

Your vocals sound awesome!  Maybe I'm still on my Traveling Wilburys kick but I got some Tom Petty feels in there too.  Def hear that Cars rhythm influence and clapping along to the beat.  This feels like it was taken out of a time capsule.  The chorus is super catchy with the harmonies.  "feelin so lonely!" \m/

Thank you so much! I will ALWAYS take a comparison to Petty and the Travelling Wilburys as high praise. Time capsule? Mission accomplished! smile smile

MRDRCAT wrote:

I love it!! I definitely heard the Cars influence right away (the handclaps & that synth...come on), but agree with Tone Matrix that there's a good and welcome dollop of Traveling Wilburys. The whole thing smacks of 80s top-40, for real. The production is clean! Those claps sound nice and crackly and the guitar sits perfectly. You are really showcasing your vocals well! Once you're done with your industrial album, your Gothic metal album, and your folk album, I'd love an 80s summer rock album. You know, since you're taking requests...
Also, "Move Like This" is SO GOOD - Ric knew exactly what to swipe from Early Ric. wink

Thank you!! I love the Travelling Wilburys - Volume 1 is another album that's baked into me.

Yeah, a triangle wave monosynth with glide turned on is essentially The Cars in shorthand. big_smile Very glad it didn't come across as just slavish copying though!

Also, TOTALLY agree about Move Like This! One of my favorite Cars albums, and a fitting swan song (even if the loss of Ben is keenly felt - but then, the band would have probably agreed). Loved what one review said - this is not a band that has been broken up for 24 years, this is a band picking a conversation back up mid-sentence.

neon liminal wrote:

The funny thing is that I barely know The Cars but within 30 seconds my brain said "hey this sounds like The Cars". It's such a fun track and your vocals are absolutely fantastic and SO FUN.

I have only one concern and it may be an artifact of these AirPods I'm using - but the claps seem really really loud every now and then, to the point where I wonder if they're clipping? It really caught me off guard. Again, might just be my listening tools.

Great track!

Thank you! I deeply love The Cars, so doing something in this style was like playtime...channeling in hundreds of hours of listening. I had a LOT of fun. heart

I'll take a look at the claps - I didn't obsessively mix this one like I usually do, and I missed putting a compressor on them (because five tracks of them). But your comment made me realize the easy way to do that for next time. So double thank you!

myfirstpunksong wrote:

I like that you're riding the feel good rock wave!

Hearing Bowie again. Interesting thoughts on the speak singers!
The first transition from synth lead to guitar was unexpected turn, but in a good way.
This was a fun one!

Thank you!! I'll always take a Bowie comparison as high praise, too heart I've always loved how synth and guitar share equal footing in their songs and how they switch between the keys and guitar.

Awesome work! Really love the sound of that lead line over the chorus, and the double tracked vocals later on - gave me real feels of old school stuff I loved! Actually got the shivers from it which is a good sign! Well done!

+1 for vocals.

I love how complete your submissions are sometimes. This ain't no beat. this is "a work"

I don't know why, but this is giving me strong "Scotty Doesn't Know" vibes, hahahaha... Awesome vibe in general and great execution. Loving the punk-y but not super-in-your-face aggressive feel of the guitar here. Just awesome!!!

dancramp wrote:

Awesome work! Really love the sound of that lead line over the chorus, and the double tracked vocals later on - gave me real feels of old school stuff I loved! Actually got the shivers from it which is a good sign! Well done!

Oh wow, thank you! Frission is high praise smile

ONE HIT KILL wrote:

+1 for vocals.

I love how complete your submissions are sometimes. This ain't no beat. this is "a work"

Thank you so much. Sometimes the ideas just click together...and the WB community is a huge help! The comments and encouragement I've gotten this year cannot be understated.

jegasus wrote:

I don't know why, but this is giving me strong "Scotty Doesn't Know" vibes, hahahaha... Awesome vibe in general and great execution. Loving the punk-y but not super-in-your-face aggressive feel of the guitar here. Just awesome!!!

Thank you! I can see it...or would that be hear it...anyway. smile There's a healthy dollop of punk influence in the Cars, makes perfect sense to me. Maybe some pop punk needs to happen next, that fits with good-time rock....

hell yeah, this is great! again - really dig your vocals in this mode.
i know it's the Cars influence, but i hear some Fountains of Wayne in there too.
but yeah, it still feels like you. nice to hear you flexing some power pop muscles

Yeah, this has a fun vibe! It fits your voice really well. The background vocals are a nice touch also. I agree with the Fountains of Wayne sound.

This is a lot of fun. I love that monosynth line. Great vocals and backups. All around just great stuff!

I really like that lead synth melody, it is super fun.

Well done.

incredible song!

also I had no idea you were from WI - amazing!  are you on social media?

jwh wrote:

i hear some Fountains of Wayne in there too.

love that!

Wow, this gave me a flashback to 1982 when I and my college roommate were DJ's at the campus radio station on Friday afternoons from 2-4 pm. We played The Cars, the Who, Guess Who, and other great bands from that era. The frat houses would open their windows and sit speakers in them blasting our show as sorta a pre-party warmup for the weekend festivities. This really showcases your singing abilities and I like the backing vocals you did on the chorus.  All the elements of this came together nicely.

jwh wrote:

hell yeah, this is great! again - really dig your vocals in this mode.
i know it's the Cars influence, but i hear some Fountains of Wayne in there too.
but yeah, it still feels like you. nice to hear you flexing some power pop muscles

Thank you! These songs have been a lot of fun - probably going to stay in the power pop vibe for a bit longer smile

SteveSkiano wrote:

Yeah, this has a fun vibe! It fits your voice really well. The background vocals are a nice touch also. I agree with the Fountains of Wayne sound.

Thanks! It's funny, I've never listened to much Fountains of Wayne before, and finally put on Welcome Interstate Managers at work on Friday. I see what you and jwh are saying - 80s influences in modern rock heart

BarristerPlong wrote:

This is a lot of fun. I love that monosynth line. Great vocals and backups. All around just great stuff!

Thank you so much!

djippy wrote:

I really like that lead synth melody, it is super fun.

Thanks! It's always been one of my favorite parts of Cars songs...those fluid, dancing monosynth lines. Trying to do one and not totally rip them off was fun smile

Well done.

orangedrink wrote:

incredible song!

also I had no idea you were from WI - amazing!  are you on social media?

jwh wrote:

i hear some Fountains of Wayne in there too.

love that!

Thanks! I love The Cars, it was so much fun to finally do an homage to them. smile

So funny thing about social media - my wife and I are on FB and Spotify as Spaces Between. We finished our first album and had the idea of promoting it for gigs.

We released it on April 1, 2020. Gigs were sorta hard to come by after that. (LOL)

We're trying to get back into playing out and posting a bit more - when we can. There's a reason we go as Spaces Between - we're trying to fit in music in the spaces between everything else in our lives smile

Bunjigram wrote:

Wow, this gave me a flashback to 1982 when I and my college roommate were DJ's at the campus radio station on Friday afternoons from 2-4 pm. We played The Cars, the Who, Guess Who, and other great bands from that era. The frat houses would open their windows and sit speakers in them blasting our show as sorta a pre-party warmup for the weekend festivities. This really showcases your singing abilities and I like the backing vocals you did on the chorus.  All the elements of this came together nicely.

Thank you!

I should have done communications or graphic design, but I was a biology major....but since I had friends at the station, I got an on-air shift because I want dot try it. I LOVED doing college radio. My first on-air shift was Fridays from 2-4 as well! The campus radio station was right by frat row as well, there was a certain energy right before the weekends smile

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