whoa man! This is so catchy and those doubled vocals and the melody you're singing. So. good. Favoriting.

whoa man! This is so catchy and those doubled vocals and the melody you're singing. So. good. Favoriting.

Thank you! Had a lot of fun with this one

[quote=SQF]whoa man! This is so catchy and those doubled vocals and the melody you're singing. So. good. Favoriting. [/quote] Thank you! Had a lot of fun with this one :)

Wow! This one has such a deft touch to it. Great texture, but so clean. Main riff is perfect - simple and catchy. Love your vocals, really amazed at how you can effortlessly drop into different styles. Only complaint is that it’s too short! Hope you can fill this out to the 4+ minutes it needs. Great job!

Wow! This one has such a deft touch to it. Great texture, but so clean. Main riff is perfect - simple and catchy. Love your vocals, really amazed at how you can effortlessly drop into different styles. Only complaint is that it’s too short! Hope you can fill this out to the 4+ minutes it needs. Great job!

Dude, this KICKS ASS! I'm not sure I can pin it closely to any genre I've heard before, this sounds so friggin fresh!!! Very dope! Please, source some more of this from whatever barrel you got it in, hahahaha...

Dude, this KICKS ASS! I'm not sure I can pin it closely to any genre I've heard before, this sounds so friggin fresh!!! Very dope! Please, source some more of this from whatever barrel you got it in, hahahaha...

Thanks so much! For all the kind words. I had a lot of fun with this, will try to finish this off as a full track, thanks for the encouragement.

[quote=Paisleyfrog]Wow! This one has such a deft touch to it. Great texture, but so clean. Main riff is perfect - simple and catchy. Love your vocals, really amazed at how you can effortlessly drop into different styles. Only complaint is that it’s too short! Hope you can fill this out to the 4+ minutes it needs. Great job! [/quote] Thanks so much! For all the kind words. I had a lot of fun with this, will try to finish this off as a full track, thanks for the encouragement. :)

Aww shucks, thank you! Hahaha I will try to stay close the barrel and do more stuff like this, its not my usual style but I really enjoyed it.

[quote=jegasus]Dude, this KICKS ASS! I'm not sure I can pin it closely to any genre I've heard before, this sounds so friggin fresh!!! Very dope! Please, source some more of this from whatever barrel you got it in, hahahaha... [/quote] Aww shucks, thank you! Hahaha I will try to stay close the barrel and do more stuff like this, its not my usual style but I really enjoyed it. :)

This is a great start for a song - cuz I'm gonna echo Paisley and say I want more! Its also great cuz youve got all the pieces there - if i was working on something like this I'd be so jazzed cuz I know all the pieces are here and they are really tight and doing what they need to. You should absolutely expand this into a full song. Or hell, the centrepiece of an album.

One bit of critical feedback; the mix here is very wide and really only the drums are getting focus in the centre of the stereo image. The pad sound (gorgeous!), the guitar and the vocals all have this swirling stereo-panned flanger chorus thing going on thats dulling their upper frequencies and causing them to get lost in the space. Something to come back to when you come back to this track, its awesome!

This is a great start for a song - cuz I'm gonna echo Paisley and say I want more! Its also great cuz youve got all the pieces there - if i was working on something like this I'd be so jazzed cuz I know all the pieces are here and they are really tight and doing what they need to. You should absolutely expand this into a full song. Or hell, the centrepiece of an album. One bit of critical feedback; the mix here is very wide and really only the drums are getting focus in the centre of the stereo image. The pad sound (gorgeous!), the guitar and the vocals all have this swirling stereo-panned flanger chorus thing going on thats dulling their upper frequencies and causing them to get lost in the space. Something to come back to when you come back to this track, its awesome!

dang, was not expecting that! this is great. love the drum sound so much, and your melodies are really strong

agree with neon that panning might be something to play with.

also would not be mad about an extended version. I could hear a chorus section where the vocal moves into a little higher range and dials up the intensity a bit.

but also, this works really well as it is and leaves the listener (hi,it me) wanting more. excellent work to you & Carlos!

dang, was not expecting that! this is great. love the drum sound so much, and your melodies are really strong <3 agree with neon that panning might be something to play with. also would not be mad about an extended version. I could hear a chorus section where the vocal moves into a little higher range and dials up the intensity a bit. but also, this works really well as it is and leaves the listener (hi,it me) wanting more. excellent work to you & Carlos!

Very cool track. I like your tone over all. You've nailed something very cool.

For feedback, I think you can bring that kick forward a bit. You loose the transient a bit when the track is going. perhaps a hint of parallel compression might do the trick or just making space in your mix for it. I think you have a nice groove for this song and the kick helps set the pace and lock people in. Never underestimate a good punchy kick to move people.

Your drone is a great atmospheric element that holds the mood of the song but maybe having a bit of a volume drop to make extra room in parts will help emphasizes your sections and give more space to your other instruments. I also might do a light roll off the bass frequencies a bit too to help the bass cut more. It might help emphasize your groove between the kick and the bass more.

Quality song build though! Keep it up. Learning is what it's all about. You got a great way of thinking about it. I'd give you more but I am on my shitty monitors today

Very cool track. I like your tone over all. You've nailed something very cool. For feedback, I think you can bring that kick forward a bit. You loose the transient a bit when the track is going. perhaps a hint of parallel compression might do the trick or just making space in your mix for it. I think you have a nice groove for this song and the kick helps set the pace and lock people in. Never underestimate a good punchy kick to move people. Your drone is a great atmospheric element that holds the mood of the song but maybe having a bit of a volume drop to make extra room in parts will help emphasizes your sections and give more space to your other instruments. I also might do a light roll off the bass frequencies a bit too to help the bass cut more. It might help emphasize your groove between the kick and the bass more. Quality song build though! Keep it up. Learning is what it's all about. You got a great way of thinking about it. I'd give you more but I am on my shitty monitors today :P

When I say roll off I mean for the drone. Just to be accurate in my language

When I say roll off I mean for the drone. Just to be accurate in my language :P