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I Want You

By myfirstpunksong on April 21, 2024 4:49 pm

All feedback is appreciated.

Will loop back to write the report on this one.

Thank you for listening.

Yes! Great song. Reminds me of something from when I was a kid, but I can't put my finger on it. Cool vibe either way.

Love the nonchalant singing with the back vocals on the intro.

Song is very well built with the different sections. Add a live drummer so it aligns with the very organic guitars and I feel the aesthetic would be even "garage rock (punk)".

Well played.

I wouldn't mind more bass in this, but honestly, it's a vibe
- Ebrit

Pop Tronics wrote:

Yes! Great song. Reminds me of something from when I was a kid, but I can't put my finger on it. Cool vibe either way.


Thanks!

djippy wrote:

Love the nonchalant singing with the back vocals on the intro.

Song is very well built with the different sections. Add a live drummer so it aligns with the very organic guitars and I feel the aesthetic would be even "garage rock (punk)".

Well played.

Yes I think a live drummer would make it much better. Thanks!



Devieus wrote:

I wouldn't mind more bass in this, but honestly, it's a vibe
- Ebrit


Thanks, yeah a friend told me it needs more bass, I'll look out for that. Thanks for the feedback

Great lick and tone/production. The transition at 40s was really nice. 1:27 sounds really cool how all the vocal takes smear together. What you got on your vocal chain?

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