Reading poetry is just right for this track. Adding a layer of dreamscape to the track. This is hypnotic. Do i dare to eat a peach? I heard the mermaid singing? This is trippy! Great energy in the delivery at 3:18!

Loving that track, it has so much personality!

Reading poetry is just right for this track. Adding a layer of dreamscape to the track. This is hypnotic. Do i dare to eat a peach? I heard the mermaid singing? This is trippy! Great energy in the delivery at 3:18! Loving that track, it has so much personality!

Really liked the use of the samples... I mean, your Dad's vocals!
Nice one

Really liked the use of the samples... I mean, your Dad's vocals! Nice one

The poetry works very well with the music in the background. So nice!

The poetry works very well with the music in the background. So nice!

Cool cameo from your dad.  The poetry really meshes with the backing music.  Interesting choices.  I liked the little commentary about how he understood it a little more that time.

I've actually had this snippet of melody in my head for a while that I keep inserting the line "Anyone lived in a pretty how town" from an E.E. Cummings poem into.  I haven't developed it yet, partially because I keep thinking I should change the lyrics to something else, but now you've got me thinking maybe I shouldn't.

Cool cameo from your dad. The poetry really meshes with the backing music. Interesting choices. I liked the little commentary about how he understood it a little more that time. I've actually had this snippet of melody in my head for a while that I keep inserting the line "Anyone lived in a pretty how town" from an E.E. Cummings poem into. I haven't developed it yet, partially because I keep thinking I should change the lyrics to something else, but now you've got me thinking maybe I shouldn't.

I like the whole happenings in here and that you preserve it in this musical way. What a precious document.

I like the whole happenings in here and that you preserve it in this musical way. What a precious document.

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A hypnotic feel to this between the spoken word and organic beats.  Awesome collab between you and your Dad

A hypnotic feel to this between the spoken word and organic beats. Awesome collab between you and your Dad :)

love this so much. your Dad has a great voice for spoken word 

love this so much. your Dad has a great voice for spoken word <3

love the spoken word and the SOUND of it all. crisp and clear and also textured. hits just right

love the spoken word and the SOUND of it all. crisp and clear and also textured. hits just right

Thank you! Yes to dreamscape, I hear those lovely poems read so well and I drift off in a daydream. Yes some trippy imagery too, love that. At 3:18 I think he started out trying to emulate actually what e.e. cummings sounded like

Ha, yes, weird and fun to sample the old pops. Thanks for checking it out.

Thank you, gad you thought so!

Thank you! glad you thought it meshed ok, very last minute kinds of quick choices. Same with the poems. He actually wanted me to use Journey of the Magi by TS Eliot at first.  We then started flipping through a book of classics and he picked more to read and I ended up picking those since mention of spring and other imagery I liked. That E.E. Cummings poem you mentioned the line from was in there too. It was cool when he read one and said he understood it more, isn’t that the way it always is, had to keep that audio in.
Yeah, no harm in keeping a line in unchanged, can credit it and people will discover a new poem, I hope to hear the result of what you create with that line!

Thank you, happy to hear. Yes I will cherish this document, so glad this happened.

This is our friend walking along here! They make us happy, because everything is just peachy. Thank you for listening and sharing the friend!

Thanks! I’m all about the hypnotix. Trying out spelling with with X here. Some super fresh branding, lol. Always good to drift away from the day.

Thank you glad you liked! I will share that with him, or maybe he’ll come look here. He will like hearing that. I think he had lot of fun reading the poems, which was wonderful.

Great to hear that, thank you! I did some quick playing around with some reverbs and things for the mix, glad it landed ok

[quote=Kedbreak136]Reading poetry is just right for this track. Adding a layer of dreamscape to the track. This is hypnotic. Do i dare to eat a peach? I heard the mermaid singing? This is trippy! Great energy in the delivery at 3:18! Loving that track, it has so much personality![/quote]Thank you! Yes to dreamscape, I hear those lovely poems read so well and I drift off in a daydream. Yes some trippy imagery too, love that. At 3:18 I think he started out trying to emulate actually what e.e. cummings sounded like :) [quote=myfirstpunksong]Really liked the use of the samples... I mean, your Dad's vocals! Nice one[/quote]Ha, yes, weird and fun to sample the old pops. Thanks for checking it out. [quote=Techson1390]The poetry works very well with the music in the background. So nice![/quote]Thank you, gad you thought so! [quote=Cosmic Cairns]Cool cameo from your dad. The poetry really meshes with the backing music. Interesting choices. I liked the little commentary about how he understood it a little more that time. I've actually had this snippet of melody in my head for a while that I keep inserting the line "Anyone lived in a pretty how town" from an E.E. Cummings poem into. I haven't developed it yet, partially because I keep thinking I should change the lyrics to something else, but now you've got me thinking maybe I shouldn't.[/quote] Thank you! glad you thought it meshed ok, very last minute kinds of quick choices. Same with the poems. He actually wanted me to use Journey of the Magi by TS Eliot at first. We then started flipping through a book of classics and he picked more to read and I ended up picking those since mention of spring and other imagery I liked. That E.E. Cummings poem you mentioned the line from was in there too. It was cool when he read one and said he understood it more, isn’t that the way it always is, had to keep that audio in. Yeah, no harm in keeping a line in unchanged, can credit it and people will discover a new poem, I hope to hear the result of what you create with that line! [quote=Q-Rosh]I like the whole happenings in here and that you preserve it in this musical way. What a precious document.[/quote]Thank you, happy to hear. Yes I will cherish this document, so glad this happened. [quote=emily][img]https://external-content.duckduckgo.com/iu/?u=https%3A%2F%2Fmedia1.tenor.com%2Fimages%2Fe0f0a97d9190c05cac33487bb11161ec%2Ftenor.gif%3Fitemid%3D5086277&f=1&nofb=1&ipt=47c98bc6f763f893bf759bd6cf14e0e60f71ef34e411179df0b2ac06a6114739&ipo=images[/img] <3[/quote] This is our friend walking along here! They make us happy, because everything is just peachy. Thank you for listening and sharing the friend! [quote=Tone Matrix]A hypnotic feel to this between the spoken word and organic beats. Awesome collab between you and your Dad :)[/quote]Thanks! I’m all about the hypnotix. Trying out spelling with with X here. Some super fresh branding, lol. Always good to drift away from the day. [quote=jwh]love this so much. your Dad has a great voice for spoken word <3[/quote] Thank you glad you liked! I will share that with him, or maybe he’ll come look here. He will like hearing that. I think he had lot of fun reading the poems, which was wonderful. [quote=horatiuromantic]love the spoken word and the SOUND of it all. crisp and clear and also textured. hits just right[/quote]Great to hear that, thank you! I did some quick playing around with some reverbs and things for the mix, glad it landed ok :)

This is beautiful!

This is beautiful!