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Of Peaches and The Universe Next Door

By miraclemiles on April 21, 2024 11:31 pm

Featuring 2Sanguine, my father, on vocals. He's visiting us from his den on the rainier side of the state this week. I asked him what he wanted to contribute to this week's track, and he said he wanted to read some poetry. We had a great couple of hours sitting at the dining room table, talking about poetry and life and recording him reading. He has some poems that have stuck with him over the years, and some favorite classic authors that happened to be in a book I had handy where we discovered some old favorites.
The poems I ended up choosing for the track are, in this order:
- [in Just-] by E.E. Cummings (https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/47247/in-just)
- To a Poor Old Woman by William Carlos Williams  (https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/51653/to-a-poor-old-woman)
- The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock by T.S. Eliot (partially read) (https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/poems/44212/the-love-song-of-j-alfred-prufrock)
----> 2Sanguine says he often says a line from this as he rolls up his trousers in the morning, since he's shrinking in his old age.
- pity this busy monster, manunkind, by E.E. Cummings (https://allpoetry.com/pity-this-busy-monster,-manunkind)

Music is from a live Creatures Once band jam with myself and bandmate Monstrosus. He sounds amazing guitar. A real family and friends collab here. Grateful for all of it.
And grateful for all of your music, WB crew!

Audio works licensed by author under:
CC0 Creative Commons Zero (Public Domain)

Reading poetry is just right for this track. Adding a layer of dreamscape to the track. This is hypnotic. Do i dare to eat a peach? I heard the mermaid singing? This is trippy! Great energy in the delivery at 3:18!

Loving that track, it has so much personality!

Really liked the use of the samples... I mean, your Dad's vocals!
Nice one

The poetry works very well with the music in the background. So nice!

Cool cameo from your dad.  The poetry really meshes with the backing music.  Interesting choices.  I liked the little commentary about how he understood it a little more that time.

I've actually had this snippet of melody in my head for a while that I keep inserting the line "Anyone lived in a pretty how town" from an E.E. Cummings poem into.  I haven't developed it yet, partially because I keep thinking I should change the lyrics to something else, but now you've got me thinking maybe I shouldn't.

I like the whole happenings in here and that you preserve it in this musical way. What a precious document.


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A hypnotic feel to this between the spoken word and organic beats.  Awesome collab between you and your Dad smile

love this so much. your Dad has a great voice for spoken word  heart

love the spoken word and the SOUND of it all. crisp and clear and also textured. hits just right

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