Thats understandable, nice attempt anyways.

Thats understandable, nice attempt anyways. :)

not too shabby for someone who's forgotten how to make music haha. I think the vocal effects work well, has a sort of shoegaze-y vibe. I'd just mix them a bit higher, maybe create a notch EQ (boost mid-highs on the voice, reduce that same frequency in the instruments). nice track overall though! excited to see what you cook up in the coming weeks.

not too shabby for someone who's forgotten how to make music haha. I think the vocal effects work well, has a sort of shoegaze-y vibe. I'd just mix them a bit higher, maybe create a notch EQ (boost mid-highs on the voice, reduce that same frequency in the instruments). nice track overall though! excited to see what you cook up in the coming weeks.

Good song for a disappointment

Good song for a disappointment :)

This might not be what you had in mind, but it is a cool rock track, and worth working on, if you want to.  Digging the progression and the vocal melody.

This might not be what you had in mind, but it is a cool rock track, and worth working on, if you want to. Digging the progression and the vocal melody.

Thanks for the feedback everyone,

Thanks for the tips, this year is definitely going to be me spending a lot of time figuring out how to mix vocals. Any resources are greatly appreciated.

Thanks for the feedback everyone, [quote=Parallelis]not too shabby for someone who's forgotten how to make music haha. I think the vocal effects work well, has a sort of shoegaze-y vibe. I'd just mix them a bit higher, maybe create a notch EQ (boost mid-highs on the voice, reduce that same frequency in the instruments). nice track overall though! excited to see what you cook up in the coming weeks.[/quote] Thanks for the tips, this year is definitely going to be me spending a lot of time figuring out how to mix vocals. Any resources are greatly appreciated.

Good stuff. I'd be interested to hear louder vocals.

Good stuff. I'd be interested to hear louder vocals.

Definitely a good start to the year! It's a little ram shackle sure - but in the best possible way. It makes me want to put on a Guided by Voices or Pavement record right now.

Definitely a good start to the year! It's a little ram shackle sure - but in the best possible way. It makes me want to put on a Guided by Voices or Pavement record right now.

yo I love this, that vocal repetition before the break is great

gonna have to steal that tech

yo I love this, that vocal repetition before the break is great gonna have to steal that tech