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Love & Lies

By Jai Cafarella on December 8, 2024 4:38 pm

This one goes further back than last weeks... yikes... neutral

While I was studying music at TAFE in 2011 there was a 'songwriting class' which wasn't so much a songwriting class as it was a lecturer going on about his achievements and dropping music industry names and such. One lesson though, he tasked us with finding our own private place around campus and attempt writing a song in half an hour. The lesson itself seemed like a pointless exercise because once we showed the class what we each came up with that was it, I don't think it even counted towards grades hmm

Anyhoo, I digress... the point of that story is this is the song I wrote in that 'lesson', and much like last weeks song, it was a staple of my solo acoustic gigs up until I stopped a few years ago, so this recording serves as it's liberation from the prison of my mind. It's a pretty simple composition so I tried to make it a little more interesting with some new layers rather than go with the original solo acoustic version, and because of that, this isn't quite how I envisioned this song back then, but here we are neutral

I got pretty lazy in the finish up because I am berry tireds, but it does the job.


It's time to put away the wine
She is drunk most of the time
It's hard to keep control of this
She's becoming quite a risk

Hazardous and whimsical
She can play you for a fool
Although I tried to hit the brakes
It is almost far too late

What is love if you're not loved?

Love and lies are you and me
You paralise me with your eyes
I catch you like a trampoline
While you catch me like a cloud
Saturated in your lies

You know the clock will never yield
Give yourself some time to heal
I know you think you're having fun
But you're like a loaded gun

Put yourself inside my shoes
I gotta watch your self-abuse
What will it take to wake you up?
'Cause I've had about enough

Love and lies are you and me
You paralise me with your eyes
I catch you like a trampoline
While you catch me like a cloud
Saturated in your lies

So here we are, at breaking point
I'm sorry but you're on your own now
If you can't respect yourself
How can you expect it from someone else?

Love and lies are you and me
You paralise me with your eyes
I catch you like a trampoline
While you catch me like a cloud
Saturated in your lies

I'm drowning in your eyes
I'm drowning in your lies
I'm drowning in your eyes

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Jangly, poppy goodness! Great vocals and melody, and really enjoyed the production you gave this. Gave me a little feel of Semisonic. Enjoyed it! Also, great story - it’s funny the journeys our songs sometimes go on smile

This one hits hard. Very powerful songwriting - that "catch me like a cloud" line is going to live rent-free in my head for a long while. heart

This is more than a few layers, this is the entire rock orchestra. It's definitely put to good use.
- Devieus

that chorus is so good! combined with your voice, this is simply amazing! (crowed goes wild)

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