Lyrics like that are funny….”Ummm…where did THAT come from?!?”

This is so unique…don’t know if I’ve ever heard a loud/soft rock song in 3 like this before! Great dynamics between verse and chorus, love how the chorus hits. And those harmonies at the end! Moar of those plz As usual, so good. So impressed on how you’re able to come up with awesome rock tracks week on week.

A couple of thoughts, just some style things - the snare on both the two and three makes the beat feel a little heavy. I’d wonder about just the 3, or maybe alternating between the 3 and then the “3 and” to give a little rhythmic kick.

Love how smooth your vocals are - but wondering if a bit more saturation on them would seat them in the guitars a bit more, they feel a little forward…would love a Bob Mould feel of being enveloped by the guitars when they hit in the chorus.

Awesome work…especially for late on Saturday! Guitar gang represent

Lyrics like that are funny….”Ummm…where did THAT come from?!?” :) This is so unique…don’t know if I’ve ever heard a loud/soft rock song in 3 like this before! Great dynamics between verse and chorus, love how the chorus hits. And those harmonies at the end! Moar of those plz :) As usual, so good. So impressed on how you’re able to come up with awesome rock tracks week on week. A couple of thoughts, just some style things - the snare on both the two and three makes the beat feel a little heavy. I’d wonder about just the 3, or maybe alternating between the 3 and then the “3 and” to give a little rhythmic kick. Love how smooth your vocals are - but wondering if a bit more saturation on them would seat them in the guitars a bit more, they feel a little forward…would love a Bob Mould feel of being enveloped by the guitars when they hit in the chorus. Awesome work…especially for late on Saturday! Guitar gang represent :)

Thanks for the feedback - I think I might keep working on this one, as I like the idea, but some refinement is needed - I think had I started on it earlier in the week I would have had a more 'producer head' on when it came tp the finishing touches.

[quote=Paisleyfrog]Lyrics like that are funny….”Ummm…where did THAT come from?!?” :) This is so unique…don’t know if I’ve ever heard a loud/soft rock song in 3 like this before! Great dynamics between verse and chorus, love how the chorus hits. And those harmonies at the end! Moar of those plz :) As usual, so good. So impressed on how you’re able to come up with awesome rock tracks week on week. A couple of thoughts, just some style things - the snare on both the two and three makes the beat feel a little heavy. I’d wonder about just the 3, or maybe alternating between the 3 and then the “3 and” to give a little rhythmic kick. Love how smooth your vocals are - but wondering if a bit more saturation on them would seat them in the guitars a bit more, they feel a little forward…would love a Bob Mould feel of being enveloped by the guitars when they hit in the chorus. Awesome work…especially for late on Saturday! Guitar gang represent :)[/quote] Thanks for the feedback - I think I might keep working on this one, as I like the idea, but some refinement is needed - I think had I started on it earlier in the week I would have had a more 'producer head' on when it came tp the finishing touches.

Relatable! I started this week’s track at like 3pm on Sunday, I was fighting for my life LOL I got a few comments on where I could take my track…yeah, wasn’t even thinking like that in the moment

[quote=Jackmsimpson] Thanks for the feedback - I think I might keep working on this one, as I like the idea, but some refinement is needed - I think had I started on it earlier in the week I would have had a more 'producer head' on when it came tp the finishing touches. [/quote] Relatable! I started this week’s track at like 3pm on Sunday, I was fighting for my life LOL I got a few comments on where I could take my track…yeah, wasn’t even thinking like that in the moment :)