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Waltz for the Lost

By hent03 on July 20, 2022 1:00 pm

Early upload because I'm in Hokkaido for a few days. I picked up my guitar on Tuesday at lunch and this tune just happened. It came together so quickly I'm almost certain I plagiarized it, though I remain hopeful I did not.

For whatever reason, when I started looking for a tune to hum, I thought of those times in childhood when you still don't understand the world, and you're trying to figure out how it works beyond what exists in front of your eyes. I thought of a young boy who sometimes talks to the man who lives next door. Maybe they connected over a certain type of music or a sport - nothing particularly deep, but enough to form a bond of sorts. A vague feeling of camaraderie. I thought of that boy watching one day as the man's wife and two sons put suitcases in a car and drive away, leaving the man by himself. The boy thinks of the alcohol he sometimes caught wafting on the man's breath, and the way the man's wife sometimes looked at his own father, but he doesn't have enough of an understanding to put any of it together. He just knows that something sad has happened, and something has ended, and that the man next door will never be the same again.

So yes. Make of that what you will, I guess.

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The choice of a waltz is very nice - it changes the dynamic and brings levity to the track. This makes for a very cute track. The description brings some darkness and melancholy to this track as well. That was a nice one! Enjoy your time in the not too hot Hokkaido!

this is an epic track in its simplicity and deepness too. love it.

Very pretty.  The chord progression and melody remind me a little of Simon and Garfunkel, but I can't identify a specific plagiarized track.  We probably all unconsciously plagiarize once in a while, but you can't possibly go through every song you've ever heard and make sure you didn't swipe something, so it's better to just proceed as if it's completely original.  Most of the time you'll add something of your own to it anyway that makes it different enough.  Really like the backstory to this as well. 

Very pretty and elegant, tho a bit quiet
- Ebrit

I love waltz pattern, I use it in this week also! Lovely chords and hum melody, especially your voice :33 feels a strong emotional part. Nice calm song smile

Reading through the story/description while listening was poetic and beautiful. The major/minor change near the end is really nice. Good job!

Right at the end I was almost starting to reminise Pigs on a Wing by Pink Floyd.

Very enjoyable microstory too. smile

Love the somber quiet feel to this.  It doesn't need to be anything else other than feeling those chords and melody as the vocals hum along.  Very cool track!

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