This is a good start for a very interesting track. I like the sound you used for drums, it has a slight harshness that contrasts with the very light melodies.

This is a good start for a very interesting track. I like the sound you used for drums, it has a slight harshness that contrasts with the very light melodies.

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Very pretty.  Almost an underwater vibe about it.  I think the drum sound is probably one of the better one's you've done?  Well the most fitting for the song at the least.  Doesn't come across as haphazard at all.  Nice one.

Very pretty. Almost an underwater vibe about it. I think the drum sound is probably one of the better one's you've done? Well the most fitting for the song at the least. Doesn't come across as haphazard at all. Nice one.

Yeah I think the drums work well actually.  Overall there continues to be a relaxing lullaby type of feel to this that makes for a very chilled out vibe.

Yeah I think the drums work well actually. Overall there continues to be a relaxing lullaby type of feel to this that makes for a very chilled out vibe.

First draft feel or not, it's a relaxed track. We always hear what we didn't want a track to be, but we don't always hear the great things the track has become. This is a a fluid track that continues developing upon everything you've been learning.

First draft feel or not, it's a relaxed track. We always hear what we didn't want a track to be, but we don't always hear the great things the track has become. This is a a fluid track that continues developing upon everything you've been learning.

What a soothing and peaceful melody. Nice work!

What a soothing and peaceful melody. Nice work!

Yes, has good feel and nice sounds. Like the drums and synth sounds. A good draft could be built out, or not

Yes, has good feel and nice sounds. Like the drums and synth sounds. A good draft could be built out, or not

I had a track once that sounded rough, underproduced and muddy but there was something magical about it. Then I totally re-did the whole thing and spent forever on it and, well, I ruined it. I managed to suck the soul out of the track. This track has a warm soul, don't ruin it.

I had a track once that sounded rough, underproduced and muddy but there was something magical about it. Then I totally re-did the whole thing and spent forever on it and, well, I ruined it. I managed to suck the soul out of the track. This track has a warm soul, don't ruin it.

I feel a little melancholy vibe in here. Nice track. I like it, as it is.

I feel a little melancholy vibe in here. Nice track. I like it, as it is.

Very nice Rhoady sounds, I do like those arpeggios a lot.

Very nice Rhoady sounds, I do like those arpeggios a lot.

I agree with rdomain, I was getting some underwater feelings too with the laid back arp.  The drums are a nice touch and give it a nice progression in response to the arp.  Well done!

I agree with rdomain, I was getting some underwater feelings too with the laid back arp. The drums are a nice touch and give it a nice progression in response to the arp. Well done!

I have used a sample from this track under the Creative Commons license for my upcoming track this week (i.e. week 51) entitled v50sverm. I think the link will be generated as https://weeklybeats.com/trumbuthegn/music/v50sverm and if that turn out not to be the case, I'll keep you posted.

Thanks for the inspiration! ヽ(⌐■_■)ノ♪♬

I have used a sample from this track under the Creative Commons license for my upcoming track this week (i.e. week 51) entitled v50sverm. I think the link will be generated as [url=https://weeklybeats.com/trumbuthegn/music/v50sverm]https://weeklybeats.com/trumbuthegn/music/v50sverm[/url] and if that turn out not to be the case, I'll keep you posted. Thanks for the inspiration! ヽ(⌐■_■)ノ♪♬

This wavy sound on the melody gives a peaceful water feeling. I really enjoy this soft bells part on 1:42. A lovely song.

This wavy sound on the melody gives a peaceful water feeling. I really enjoy this soft bells part on 1:42. A lovely song.

This really is lovely. Sometimes the "first draft" really captures something anyway. I could definitely listen to a record of tracks like this.

This really is lovely. Sometimes the "first draft" really captures something anyway. I could definitely listen to a record of tracks like this.

This got a very nice 'mature lullaby' quality to it. I really like the lofi drums! Great track!

This got a very nice 'mature lullaby' quality to it. I really like the lofi drums! Great track!