This is pretty short. It's like the song just started and then it ended. You got the foundation down - pads, drum loop, I would be happy to hear a melody and some development. Judging by some of your other entries you're into dance and ambient. One thing you want to do with this kind of music is to really pump up the loudness on certain elements, like kicks and snares. Compress those, make them stand out in the mix. Good luck with it all, hope to hear more.

This is pretty short. It's like the song just started and then it ended. You got the foundation down - pads, drum loop, I would be happy to hear a melody and some development. Judging by some of your other entries you're into dance and ambient. One thing you want to do with this kind of music is to really pump up the loudness on certain elements, like kicks and snares. Compress those, make them stand out in the mix. Good luck with it all, hope to hear more.