Great phrasing on the vocals, particularly the ending. I'd like to hear it at a slower tempo.

Great phrasing on the vocals, particularly the ending. I'd like to hear it at a slower tempo.

I could probably cut the intro which is too long and slow it down about 10-20 bpm and it would be about the same overall length.

[quote=Jim Wood]Great phrasing on the vocals, particularly the ending. I'd like to hear it at a slower tempo.[/quote] I could probably cut the intro which is too long and slow it down about 10-20 bpm and it would be about the same overall length.

nice work!  I like the ending too.  cool song topic

nice work! I like the ending too. cool song topic

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Whoah, Edmund. That "contemporary funkier Rupert Holmes" vibe did took me by surprise! Love those "slapback echo" vocals. The track has some kind of syncopated swing previously unseen this year in your WB IMHO.

I wish the kickdrum would be a little bit louder to dance to it. Really nice!!!

Whoah, Edmund. That "contemporary funkier Rupert Holmes" vibe did took me by surprise! Love those "slapback echo" vocals. The track has some kind of syncopated swing previously unseen this year in your WB IMHO. I wish the kickdrum would be a little bit louder to dance to it. Really nice!!!

Thank you.  Glad you like it.

That is a very small guitar.  Must be hard to play.

Thank you.  The only Rupert Holmes I think I've ever heard is that Escape song from the '70s.

[quote=orangedrink]nice work! I like the ending too. cool song topic[/quote] Thank you. Glad you like it. [quote=Ipaghost][url="http://giphy.com/gifs/cat-cute-cats-mHi4OOyUflEn6"][img]https://media3.giphy.com/media/mHi4OOyUflEn6/200.gif[/img][/url][/quote] That is a very small guitar. Must be hard to play. [quote=laguna]Whoah, Edmund. That "contemporary funkier Rupert Holmes" vibe did took me by surprise! Love those "slapback echo" vocals. The track has some kind of syncopated swing previously unseen this year in your WB IMHO. I wish the kickdrum would be a little bit louder to dance to it. Really nice!!![/quote] Thank you. The only Rupert Holmes I think I've ever heard is that Escape song from the '70s.

Dude I really like the lyrics. Deep stuff. Favorited this one, want to listen to it more. "Snatch your scarf" though... i dunno ;-)

Dude I really like the lyrics. Deep stuff. Favorited this one, want to listen to it more. "Snatch your scarf" though... i dunno ;-)

Haha, my younger son didn't like that this song says "brush your teeth."  Sometimes you write lyrics and they aren't all that.  Even the Beatles' "Yesterday" started off as "Scrambled Eggs."

[quote=colorful grey]Dude I really like the lyrics. Deep stuff. Favorited this one, want to listen to it more. "Snatch your scarf" though... i dunno ;-) [/quote] Haha, my younger son didn't like that this song says "brush your teeth." Sometimes you write lyrics and they aren't all that. Even the Beatles' "Yesterday" started off as "Scrambled Eggs."