This sounds really great Dave! I love the lyrics, and the two solos are charming. I also like how the placement of the solos works well to break up the narrative and make the listener wait to see how the story develops. I wasn't expecting the last verse and I loved it!

This sounds really great Dave! I love the lyrics, and the two solos are charming. I also like how the placement of the solos works well to break up the narrative and make the listener wait to see how the story develops. I wasn't expecting the last verse and I loved it!

Hey!  These tunes are playing in such a random way in my browser!!  Great little tune.  Lovely guitar tone

Hey! These tunes are playing in such a random way in my browser!! Great little tune. Lovely guitar tone

You could totally play our Songwriter Showcase in Bloomington, IN.

You could totally play our Songwriter Showcase in Bloomington, IN.

This is pleasant.  I really like your voice.

This is pleasant. I really like your voice.

Totally awesome! I like the lyrics and that harmonica solo was boss.

Totally awesome! I like the lyrics and that harmonica solo was boss.

this is awesome

this is awesome

It's nice to have some acoustic material to break up the electronica 

It's nice to have some acoustic material to break up the electronica :)

Cool story man, well played

Cool story man, well played

Thanks for all the great feedback everyone!

Thanks for all the great feedback everyone!