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You & Me (Two Versions)

By danju on October 20, 2024 9:25 pm

Haven't been here for awhile since I haven't been able to finish anything, but this week I wrote a song that I really want to perfect.

I'm in between two different versions here so I just uploaded both (with a quick little transition in between to put some space in between) But I'm torn on which one to go with haha

I was thinking of maybe adding a bridge or more instrumental in the middle of it later on.


Looking forward to feedback on anything in it (writing, performance, mixing, etc)!

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Lyrics:

Singing bird, oh won’t you stay
Don’t dream of home so far away
I’ll be by your side
Right now
And always

When you move, a dream you make
And On and on things start to change
But after all this time
You’ll find
That it’s always you and me

In your wake, a song you sang
It takes my heart, now yours to claim
Through the end of time
You’ll find
That it’s always you and me

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Good to see you again! Beautiful piano playing and beautiful singing. I missed your tracks man!

I always liked the moods you bring with your tracks.

I like the Vocals production a lot. Nice timbre, a couple little backs here and there, agressive autotuning done with good taste.

This track feels a bit like two in one with the break at 2 mins. I don't know if transition could be smoother, but you are on something for sure.

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