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Take Me

By danju on November 22, 2020 8:03 pm

Messed around with some more vocal processing this week. Nothing drastic but I tried to just compress less (might need to compress even less), saturate a bit more, and mess with some delay slap-back. I think I spent more time mixing than on creating the song but thats just how it goes haha. Still trying to find a way to have the vocals not take up too much head space and feel a bit "fluffier" for lack of a better term.

Wrote a song about toxic relationships though haha


Lyrics:
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Even in heartbreak
So emotional
I want all your faults
Tell me everything you know
Even when your down
I’ll still keep you around
I’ll give you all my sorrow
And trade it for tomorrow

So take me away
Even when you’re down I want you stay
Feed me all your energy
Even when you’re next to me

Take me away
Even when you’re down I want you stay
Feed me all your energy (baby)
Giving me your everything and more

Baby won’t you tell me where I’m standing
Only hoping now you’re understanding
Un-denying, when I lie to,
Will tell me when you lie to?

I won’t ever tell you where you can’t be
As long where you are is here with me
Everything you need comes naturally
As long as I’m here and you never leave

Take me over
Hold me in
Never leave
Never leaving

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November 23, 2020 1:41 am

Goddamn dude, this is so sweet.  Vocals sound amazing and sit perfectly in the mix.  The contrast in dynamics and overall energy is great too, such a huge range.   

November 23, 2020 10:06 pm

I agree, the contrast between the verse and chorus is a really nice feature on this one.

November 25, 2020 12:49 am

Cool composition. The piano is just the right fit for this track. You have also some great bass sounds there. Good singing there.

November 25, 2020 3:06 am

The vocals have progressed a lot since the last track I heard. The bassline is so tasty alongside those full and floaty piano.

November 27, 2020 9:01 pm

I think vocals sound great! Chords super nice. Beat carries it right through. Nice.

November 30, 2020 4:31 am

You've gotten so many really cool beats like this happening over the year, man. Feels like you've easily got enough for an EP or album if you wanted.

December 1, 2020 1:21 pm

This sounds awesome.  The overall mix, the beat, the piano and your vocals mesh so nicely.  Really well done!

December 13, 2020 11:43 am

Really cool when the bass comes in.  The track fills nicely and good tones at the end also.

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