This turned out great - it's got a sweet sound to it. Song structure can definitely be a pain to settle on, but this sounds pretty coherent to me. Nice work!

This turned out great - it's got a sweet sound to it. Song structure can definitely be a pain to settle on, but this sounds pretty coherent to me. Nice work! :D

The atmosphere of the song is great, but I especially like the bass phrase.

The atmosphere of the song is great, but I especially like the bass phrase.

Really nice! I like the thing going on with the crash cymbal in the big parts. Definitely give it an extra something. Vocals are great as always

Really nice! I like the thing going on with the crash cymbal in the big parts. Definitely give it an extra something. Vocals are great as always :)

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Thank you! I'm realizing I want to get better at adding in bridge sections and other variations that still fit the tone - I was a bit bummed that I felt I fell short of what I wanted here. Glad things are coherent otherwise!

Thanks! Always working on the balance of bass being a compliment vs a focus, glad this one worked.

Thanks! Much appreciated, glad they could help things feel bigger in those sections.

Waaaaves

[quote=levelcapybara]This turned out great - it's got a sweet sound to it. Song structure can definitely be a pain to settle on, but this sounds pretty coherent to me. Nice work! :D[/quote] Thank you! I'm realizing I want to get better at adding in bridge sections and other variations that still fit the tone - I was a bit bummed that I felt I fell short of what I wanted here. Glad things are coherent otherwise! [quote=KAMI Lime]The atmosphere of the song is great, but I especially like the bass phrase.[/quote] Thanks! Always working on the balance of bass being a compliment vs a focus, glad this one worked. [quote=v0]Really nice! I like the thing going on with the crash cymbal in the big parts. Definitely give it an extra something. Vocals are great as always :)[/quote] Thanks! Much appreciated, glad they could help things feel bigger in those sections. [quote=emily][img]https://media.giphy.com/media/v1.Y2lkPTc5MGI3NjExMzh6NWtrZmVmem5kc3g3M2hxMjB5ZXRvZXVpam1yN3pmNHVucHhkcSZlcD12MV9pbnRlcm5hbF9naWZfYnlfaWQmY3Q9Zw/nKHJC3SIAVFejWLCrQ/giphy.gif[/img] [/quote] :) Waaaaves

i really liked how you blended the guitar parts with the riff become if more harmonised in different sections. Also really cool choruses! Great job

i really liked how you blended the guitar parts with the riff become if more harmonised in different sections. Also really cool choruses! Great job :)

This feels more singer songwriter than pop, but I suppose there's a lot of overlap around that time.
I like this, laid back.
- Devieus

This feels more singer songwriter than pop, but I suppose there's a lot of overlap around that time. I like this, laid back. - Devieus