Such a sweet story you are telling and giving this outsider a voice. He deserves his chance for being on the right side of history. The guitarsolos project that weird imperfection perfectly. I have to love this idiot.
A wonderful song and lovely executed. Thank you.

Such a sweet story you are telling and giving this outsider a voice. He deserves his chance for being on the right side of history. The guitarsolos project that weird imperfection perfectly. I have to love this idiot. A wonderful song and lovely executed. Thank you.

Thanks!  Outsiders and idiots deserve a voice as well I think.

[quote=Q-Rosh]Such a sweet story you are telling and giving this outsider a voice. He deserves his chance for being on the right side of history. The guitarsolos project that weird imperfection perfectly. I have to love this idiot. A wonderful song and lovely executed. Thank you.[/quote]Thanks! Outsiders and idiots deserve a voice as well I think.

That's one beautiful poetic journey. How many layers of acoustic rhythm guitars are you putting there? It sounds like there is quite a team.

That's one beautiful poetic journey. How many layers of acoustic rhythm guitars are you putting there? It sounds like there is quite a team.

There are two tracks of acoustic guitar on here.  I did two takes and layered them on top of each other.

[quote=Kedbreak136]That's one beautiful poetic journey. How many layers of acoustic rhythm guitars are you putting there? It sounds like there is quite a team. [/quote]There are two tracks of acoustic guitar on here. I did two takes and layered them on top of each other.

Cool song man, love the weird machinery type sound that keeps coming up.  Definitely interesting song topic, very cool writing again.

Cool song man, love the weird machinery type sound that keeps coming up. Definitely interesting song topic, very cool writing again.

Thanks!  That's actually another sound I found on the good old iris2.

[quote=Chrisfoo]Cool song man, love the weird machinery type sound that keeps coming up. Definitely interesting song topic, very cool writing again.[/quote]Thanks! That's actually another sound I found on the good old iris2.

Just better hope you know what you did wrong, lest you make yourself the bigger fool apologizing for the wrong thing.
- Dev

Just better hope you know what you did wrong, lest you make yourself the bigger fool apologizing for the wrong thing. - Dev

Oh man, this sounds great! Your productions keep getting better. And your songwriting is as good as ever!

Oh man, this sounds great! Your productions keep getting better. And your songwriting is as good as ever!

True.  This could quickly become a non-redemption tour.

Thanks!  I thought this one turned out pretty good.  Trying to keep improving on the production front.

[quote=cfurrow]Oh man, this sounds great! Your productions keep getting better. And your songwriting is as good as ever! [/quote]True. This could quickly become a non-redemption tour. [quote=cfurrow]Oh man, this sounds great! Your productions keep getting better. And your songwriting is as good as ever! [/quote]Thanks! I thought this one turned out pretty good. Trying to keep improving on the production front.

haha yes, I can relate too! This bops along so happily. Great story here, good lyrics, always impressed by your lyrical abilities! Fun fun. Cool idea to start with a title and build from there. Also love that you thought it was fiction, but then realized there's some truth! Production on this is great too, so crisp and loud and clear.

haha yes, I can relate too! This bops along so happily. Great story here, good lyrics, always impressed by your lyrical abilities! Fun fun. Cool idea to start with a title and build from there. Also love that you thought it was fiction, but then realized there's some truth! Production on this is great too, so crisp and loud and clear.

I had a writing professor in college who said "All stories are true."  I guess this is the sort of thing he meant.  I'm trying to put some effort into lyric-writing and production this year while also trying not to take things too seriously and have fun.  Hopefully it results in a good balance.

[quote=miraclemiles]haha yes, I can relate too! This bops along so happily. Great story here, good lyrics, always impressed by your lyrical abilities! Fun fun. Cool idea to start with a title and build from there. Also love that you thought it was fiction, but then realized there's some truth! Production on this is great too, so crisp and loud and clear. [/quote]I had a writing professor in college who said "All stories are true." I guess this is the sort of thing he meant. I'm trying to put some effort into lyric-writing and production this year while also trying not to take things too seriously and have fun. Hopefully it results in a good balance.

The guitars sound great in this.  Great production on the mix and all of those added fx touches.  Excellent wah guitar sound too at the end. Nice work!

The guitars sound great in this. Great production on the mix and all of those added fx touches. Excellent wah guitar sound too at the end. Nice work!

Thanks!  I love utilizing wah guitar when I get a chance.  It's such a fun sound.

[quote=Tone Matrix]The guitars sound great in this. Great production on the mix and all of those added fx touches. Excellent wah guitar sound too at the end. Nice work![/quote]Thanks! I love utilizing wah guitar when I get a chance. It's such a fun sound.

Wow beautiful vocals and production! Love the deep rich vocal up front in the mix.  Some awesome melodic riffs and trilly synth sounds in the back of the vocals add some nice dimension and depth. 

Wow beautiful vocals and production! Love the deep rich vocal up front in the mix. Some awesome melodic riffs and trilly synth sounds in the back of the vocals add some nice dimension and depth.

Thanks!  I liked the way those synths were interacting with the vocals, too.  Felt pretty good with how this one turned out.

[quote=NWSPR]Wow beautiful vocals and production! Love the deep rich vocal up front in the mix. Some awesome melodic riffs and trilly synth sounds in the back of the vocals add some nice dimension and depth. [/quote]Thanks! I liked the way those synths were interacting with the vocals, too. Felt pretty good with how this one turned out.

The wah timing at the end, the sustained-stab of a synth, and the little squeaks in the right channel mostly contribute a lot to a delightful tune to begin with. Enjoyed listening to this.

The wah timing at the end, the sustained-stab of a synth, and the little squeaks in the right channel mostly contribute a lot to a delightful tune to begin with. Enjoyed listening to this.

Thanks!  I do think the little details can often make a big difference!

[quote=ilzxc]The wah timing at the end, the sustained-stab of a synth, and the little squeaks in the right channel mostly contribute a lot to a delightful tune to begin with. Enjoyed listening to this.[/quote]Thanks! I do think the little details can often make a big difference!

Feeling warmly towards this character, trying to make things right. You’ve got a real knack for storytelling through music. Really nice arrangement once again and those guitars halfway through are just magic.

Feeling warmly towards this character, trying to make things right. You’ve got a real knack for storytelling through music. Really nice arrangement once again and those guitars halfway through are just magic. :)

Thanks!  I like to write fiction as well as make music so I'm trying to marry those sensibilities together a little bit, although song lyrics are definitely a different beast than short stories.  Glad to hear those guitars are doing their job!

[quote=Autovessel]Feeling warmly towards this character, trying to make things right. You’ve got a real knack for storytelling through music. Really nice arrangement once again and those guitars halfway through are just magic. :) [/quote]Thanks! I like to write fiction as well as make music so I'm trying to marry those sensibilities together a little bit, although song lyrics are definitely a different beast than short stories. Glad to hear those guitars are doing their job!