happy 1/4-of-the-way-through-the-year and way too kick it off! (and good job with the lyrics for 30min to do it)

happy 1/4-of-the-way-through-the-year and way too kick it off! (and good job with the lyrics for 30min to do it)

Of course 2:16 is the highlight of the track. I liked the 90s punk energy of this track and the meta comments about the track as part of the lyrics. There is something deeply templatized about 90s punk, but that's ok. It's like a good hamburger - it does not revolutionize cuisine but it makes you feel good.

Of course 2:16 is the highlight of the track. :) I liked the 90s punk energy of this track and the meta comments about the track as part of the lyrics. There is something deeply templatized about 90s punk, but that's ok. It's like a good hamburger - it does not revolutionize cuisine but it makes you feel good.

digging this! so good, reminds me of the 2000s!!

digging this! so good, reminds me of the 2000s!!

This is a solid pop-punk tune. The energy is there (and the angst) and the riffs are pretty killer. I think maybe you're selling yourself short a bit on the quality of the song. Also, farting in your song is some real punk rock energy for sure, haha.

This is a solid pop-punk tune. The energy is there (and the angst) and the riffs are pretty killer. I think maybe you're selling yourself short a bit on the quality of the song. Also, farting in your song is some real punk rock energy for sure, haha.

Some solid punk stuff here! 'I made the verses too long' haha. I thought the verses are pretty decent actually. Good work on showing up and putting one out

Some solid punk stuff here! 'I made the verses too long' haha. I thought the verses are pretty decent actually. Good work on showing up and putting one out

this is so good!  your speedtrash is better than most ppls full effort.

I'M ACTUALLY BEING JUDGEY AND THEN THE LYRICS SAID DON'T BE JUDGEY BUT I WAS BEING POSITIVE BUT WHATEVER

me: "what band does this remind me of?"

you: *gigantic fart*

me: "ah yes, the imitable Blink-182"

this is so good! your speedtrash is better than most ppls full effort. I'M ACTUALLY BEING JUDGEY AND THEN THE LYRICS SAID DON'T BE JUDGEY BUT I WAS BEING POSITIVE BUT WHATEVER me: "what band does this remind me of?" you: *gigantic fart* me: "ah yes, the imitable Blink-182" :)

Man, you rock. Drums and guitars are spot on and your vocal timbre really works well with that pop punk rock vibe.

Man, you rock. Drums and guitars are spot on and your vocal timbre really works well with that pop punk rock vibe.

Haha love the lyrics and what a fun song! I've been wanting to write a punk song. Sounds like a bunch of fun!

Haha love the lyrics and what a fun song! I've been wanting to write a punk song. Sounds like a bunch of fun!

wait the lyrics are self-referential haha! the flow is great, didn't realize at first! great production

yes farts !!!!!!!

very ars poetica of you

wait the lyrics are self-referential haha! the flow is great, didn't realize at first! great production yes farts !!!!!!! very ars poetica of you

“One more line until the end” was actually really good though

“One more line until the end” was actually really good though

This is a solid punk jam! I enjoyed the straight ahead driving energy of it. I also like that you leaned into more of a minor tonality for this one, at least in the verses. Nice job!

This is a solid punk jam! I enjoyed the straight ahead driving energy of it. I also like that you leaned into more of a minor tonality for this one, at least in the verses. Nice job!

Thanks all. In hindsight, I prob should have left out the fart (held it in?) but, it's on the record now.

[quote=b bro]happy 1/4-of-the-way-through-the-year and way too kick it off! (and good job with the lyrics for 30min to do it)[/quote] [quote=Kedbreak136]Of course 2:16 is the highlight of the track. :) I liked the 90s punk energy of this track and the meta comments about the track as part of the lyrics. There is something deeply templatized about 90s punk, but that's ok. It's like a good hamburger - it does not revolutionize cuisine but it makes you feel good.[/quote] [quote=tweidner103]digging this! so good, reminds me of the 2000s!![/quote] [quote=ViridianLoom]This is a solid pop-punk tune. The energy is there (and the angst) and the riffs are pretty killer. I think maybe you're selling yourself short a bit on the quality of the song. Also, farting in your song is some real punk rock energy for sure, haha.[/quote] [quote=myfirstpunksong]Some solid punk stuff here! 'I made the verses too long' haha. I thought the verses are pretty decent actually. Good work on showing up and putting one out[/quote] [quote=orangedrink]this is so good! your speedtrash is better than most ppls full effort. I'M ACTUALLY BEING JUDGEY AND THEN THE LYRICS SAID DON'T BE JUDGEY BUT I WAS BEING POSITIVE BUT WHATEVER me: "what band does this remind me of?" you: *gigantic fart* me: "ah yes, the imitable Blink-182" :)[/quote] [quote=djippy]Man, you rock. Drums and guitars are spot on and your vocal timbre really works well with that pop punk rock vibe. [/quote] [quote=Lukayu]Haha love the lyrics and what a fun song! I've been wanting to write a punk song. Sounds like a bunch of fun![/quote] [quote=horatiuromantic]wait the lyrics are self-referential haha! the flow is great, didn't realize at first! great production yes farts !!!!!!! very ars poetica of you[/quote] [quote=prophisee]“One more line until the end” was actually really good though [/quote] [quote=Saguaro Gigante]This is a solid punk jam! I enjoyed the straight ahead driving energy of it. I also like that you leaned into more of a minor tonality for this one, at least in the verses. Nice job![/quote] Thanks all. In hindsight, I prob should have left out the fart (held it in?) but, it's on the record now.