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Cardiac Dirge

By blighters_rock on February 13, 2022 5:51 pm

This was pretty fun to write. Sometimes limiting your options is the best way to expand your creativity. I decided to limit myself to this alternating two chord progression. Even though it's really simple, I'm really happy with the overall vibe. It's even heart themed, for valentines day.


Someone please tell me if there's an easier way to do this in Logic Pro X...

I wanted a big saucy reverb on the kick drum and on the "important" snare hits. Kick drum was easy enough to gate and send into reverb. However, there's a lot of snare action going on, so from my perspective my choices were to


1. make a copy of the snare track and edit out the non-reverb hits, then send that to reverb
2. automate the reverb send directly
3. use a gate side-chained on a utility track (played via MIDI to open the gate)


I went with 1 because it was the easiest to be accurate with, but I'm interested if anyone has any other ideas I didn't think of.


Lyrics:

Ripping out a part of me
a piece of mine for peace of mind
They're stitching up the cavity
where once there was a heart of mine


Now that this is out of me
a part of you is going free
I'm living with the vestiges
of vascular anatomy


The doctor said the surgery
Might be the end--the last of me
But missing this is feeling fine
When missing you was misery


And when you cut the artery
a final pulse, in memory
A heart you left upon a shelf
There's nothing else to make me bleed

I appreciate the simple approach, it allowed you to focus quite a bit on making the most of the limited progression. Really like the drum beat and it feels really well mixed. Lyrics are super inspired, I like the concept and it seems well executed, I especially liked the second stanza. The only thing I think needs improvement is the trumpet but I've personally had a lot of difficulty getting vst horns to sound realistic so I think for what it is it does fine here.

I like the song, the trumpet makes it interesting enough even if only 2 chords. Good job again with the vocals, it is well done.

I don't know that much Logic, but I would have probably done the same approach as yours, duplicate tracks, edit only keep 2 and 4 snares and send it to reverb. (or I would probably just has been lazy and put just a little less verb on the snare... lol.

ViridianLoom wrote:

I appreciate the simple approach, it allowed you to focus quite a bit on making the most of the limited progression. Really like the drum beat and it feels really well mixed. Lyrics are super inspired, I like the concept and it seems well executed, I especially liked the second stanza. The only thing I think needs improvement is the trumpet but I've personally had a lot of difficulty getting vst horns to sound realistic so I think for what it is it does fine here.

Yeah, agree about the trumpets. Didn't have time this week to learn trumpet--maybe next week. Thanks for the kind words about the lyrics and the mix. I was really happy with both of these as well. I think this might be my favorite mix yet.

djippy wrote:

I like the song, the trumpet makes it interesting enough even if only 2 chords. Good job again with the vocals, it is well done.

I don't know that much Logic, but I would have probably done the same approach as yours, duplicate tracks, edit only keep 2 and 4 snares and send it to reverb. (or I would probably just has been lazy and put just a little less verb on the snare... lol.

Haha, at least I'm not crazy! I went to bed Saturday night pondering if there was a better way to do it. Glad you liked it, thanks for the remarks.

I'm really enjoying your lyrical narratives.
I predict I would be a claustrophobic mess if constrained to 2 chords - A challenge You've absolutely nailed.

Magnificent song. Love everything about it. very very good stuff.

Cool track!

your vocal EQ is perfection

great limitation, awesome lyrics, great trumpet and the little triangle is THE BEST

orangedrink wrote:

your vocal EQ is perfection

great limitation, awesome lyrics, great trumpet and the little triangle is THE BEST

You should track trumpet for his tracks! smile

Cool song, strong momentum and sound palette. And I personally would have gone with mixing option #1 because I like seeing the visual of the emphasized hits.

Those drums are amazing and everything just fits together so well. Those lyrics are quite sad though.

This is really cool. I like the idea of creative constraints. To use this as an exploratory/ experiment thing. Think I will constrain this week!

Suhweet vocal harmonies that play well with the brass melody. Well done!

I like how you went with the challenge and if you had not pointed out, I would not have picked on it. it works well. The drums are good, and the little bell that sometimes ring on the left is a nice addition. Very nice vocals!

haleja wrote:

I'm really enjoying your lyrical narratives.
I predict I would be a claustrophobic mess if constrained to 2 chords - A challenge You've absolutely nailed.

Thanks so much! I struggle just as hard as everyone else with lyrics, it's nice to get complimented on them!

Q-Rosh wrote:

Magnificent song. Love everything about it. very very good stuff.

Much appreciated!

Nestrogen wrote:

Cool track!

Thanks!

orangedrink wrote:

your vocal EQ is perfection

great limitation, awesome lyrics, great trumpet and the little triangle is THE BEST

Thanks for the positive feedback on the vocals. I need to improve my workflow re: saving plugin presets and reusing. I reinvent the wheel every week for most things.

djippy wrote:
orangedrink wrote:

your vocal EQ is perfection

great limitation, awesome lyrics, great trumpet and the little triangle is THE BEST

You should track trumpet for his tracks! smile

I really wanted to reach out and see if he had room in his schedule to hook me up w/some real trumpet, but it was too late in the week and *excuses*. If I had another song lead, I would have back-burnered this one to try to make it happen. Next time!

pineapple_dan wrote:

Cool song, strong momentum and sound palette. And I personally would have gone with mixing option #1 because I like seeing the visual of the emphasized hits.

Thanks! Glad I'm not crazy for choosing #1. It seemed too painful to be the best solution, but sometimes the best solution is.

Devieus wrote:

Those drums are amazing and everything just fits together so well. Those lyrics are quite sad though.

Funny that such a simple drum part is probably my favorite drum recording I've done. Glad you dug it.

myfirstpunksong wrote:

This is really cool. I like the idea of creative constraints. To use this as an exploratory/ experiment thing. Think I will constrain this week!

Looking forward to listening

Tone Matrix wrote:

Suhweet vocal harmonies that play well with the brass melody. Well done!

Thanks!

Kedbreak136 wrote:

I like how you went with the challenge and if you had not pointed out, I would not have picked on it. it works well. The drums are good, and the little bell that sometimes ring on the left is a nice addition. Very nice vocals!

Heh I put that in because I added the tambourine to the right and it just felt a little too empty there during the verses. Appreciated!

I will for real record some trumpet for you.  Not sure how early we'll have to plan this, but let's try!

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