I like it! The sounds are nice (also good drums!) and I think the arrangement also already has a lot going for it. It perhaps starts a bit repetitive (if I may), but it becomes quite diverse after the 2 minute mark. Just an idea that this gives me: You could perhaps shorten the bit before the 2 minute mark and return to the ideas that are in the lead there where the track currently ends. So make this into a returning section. I think with what you have between the 2 minute mark and the end now, there would be plenty of variation to keep things interesting. But take this all with a grain of salt, because I am not great at arrangements myself.

I like it! The sounds are nice (also good drums!) and I think the arrangement also already has a lot going for it. It perhaps starts a bit repetitive (if I may), but it becomes quite diverse after the 2 minute mark. Just an idea that this gives me: You could perhaps shorten the bit before the 2 minute mark and return to the ideas that are in the lead there where the track currently ends. So make this into a returning section. I think with what you have between the 2 minute mark and the end now, there would be plenty of variation to keep things interesting. But take this all with a grain of salt, because I am not great at arrangements myself.

This is really valuable feedback. I appreciate the detail you went in to here. I'm fairly experimental with arrangements.. it mostly feels like i'm throwing paint at a wall. That combined with some amount of trying to make 1 thing flow into the next. Lately I've had some sort of structure by way of making like.. the first 16 bars into an intro for example.. and that's mostly how it's done for now.. just 16 bars of this, 16 of that, 16 of something else.. and maybe some repetitions or a bridge somewhere.

[quote=WahSp]I like it! The sounds are nice (also good drums!) and I think the arrangement also already has a lot going for it. It perhaps starts a bit repetitive (if I may), but it becomes quite diverse after the 2 minute mark. Just an idea that this gives me: You could perhaps shorten the bit before the 2 minute mark and return to the ideas that are in the lead there where the track currently ends. So make this into a returning section. I think with what you have between the 2 minute mark and the end now, there would be plenty of variation to keep things interesting. But take this all with a grain of salt, because I am not great at arrangements myself.[/quote] This is really valuable feedback. I appreciate the detail you went in to here. I'm fairly experimental with arrangements.. it mostly feels like i'm throwing paint at a wall. That combined with some amount of trying to make 1 thing flow into the next. Lately I've had some sort of structure by way of making like.. the first 16 bars into an intro for example.. and that's mostly how it's done for now.. just 16 bars of this, 16 of that, 16 of something else.. and maybe some repetitions or a bridge somewhere.