First off, mad props for posting a vocal track. That is awesome, and something I haven't ever tried yet. Also, your singing voice is very nice. I think I really mainly just wish that some of the notes were altered in the melody of the lyrics. Like in certain parts, the lyrics are different but the same notes repeat within the lyrics.. and thats fine but I kinda wish that sometimes as it repeats, it would have changed the 2nd half of the notes or something. Just trying to give what little help I can.

First off, mad props for posting a vocal track. That is awesome, and something I haven't ever tried yet. Also, your singing voice is very nice. I think I really mainly just wish that some of the notes were altered in the melody of the lyrics. Like in certain parts, the lyrics are different but the same notes repeat within the lyrics.. and thats fine but I kinda wish that sometimes as it repeats, it would have changed the 2nd half of the notes or something. Just trying to give what little help I can. =)

Thanks Zeropass. I know what you mean, on the melody line, and it's funny, I was just thinking about that same thing with this weeks upcoming song. Thanks for the feedback!

Thanks Zeropass. I know what you mean, on the melody line, and it's funny, I was just thinking about that same thing with this weeks upcoming song. Thanks for the feedback!