III
By underground Luau on January 21, 2018 7:36 pm
Brutally honest criticism welcome, thanks!
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Brutally honest criticism welcome, thanks!
Audio works licensed by author under:
CC Attribution Noncommercial No Derivative Works (BY-NC-ND)
liking the looseness of this. i'd love to hear a jazz drummer take this on and lay something over top. as is it works well though, dig the subtle bitcrush atmosphere.
It's pretty good, the composition is nice and the instruments work well. However the bass could use some more prominence.
I like the harmony you're exploring here. It's interesting to follow the guitar. I'd like to hear more of that, more development and progression through the track. Fav.