The Jade Warrior
By TheDaeVolta on July 5, 2026 10:38 pm
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Got really in my head about this one, instead of letting things flow naturally I forced somethings which I feel made for a worse song - BUT I REALLY like the instrumentation and my use of orchestrated samples.
I re-recorded the vocals like an hour and change before the deadline >_>
The song was inspired by a news article about a sword that was found in Turkey by a metal detectorist - from close to the end of the bronze age that was found upright, and the oxidation made it look Jade, so I made up a story about The Jade Warrior who gave up after failing a quest and this is his song
› Lyrics
‹ Lyrics
I thrust the sword
In the ground
To face my fate
My soul
Is bound
For hells gates
The seers told me
that I wasn't chosen
but I took my fate
in my own hands
the one the gods said
would save us all
he met my blade
and had a tragic fall
I pray the gods will have mercy
and kill me quick
The jade warrior has failed
the moniker was meant
for the one the prophecy foretold
the name I stole
The promise of fame
and riches
made me take the name
The seers chose a man
too young for the strain
I should have taken him
under my wings
given him a fighting chance
with my training
I pray the gods will have mercy
and kill me quick
The jade warrior has failed
the moniker was meant
for the one the prophecy foretold
the name I stole
I knew I fucked up
the moment
I held the blade
the weight was wrong
and still I stayed
I could have helped
been a part of the glory
my ego wouldn't let that stand
And now I'm sorry
(Minor)
I knew it was a mistake
I knew it was wrong
I just wanted a little taste of fame
And now everyone is gone
I knew I needed to prove myself
Turns out I spelled their doom
I just wanted to be hero
Not put them in their tombs
I pray the gods will have mercy
and kill me quick
The jade warrior has failed
the moniker was meant
for the one the prophecy foretold
the name I stole
I'm proud of a LOT on this track, and not proud of almost as much, I feel I tried too hard on the vocals - which are generally best when I relax and have fun rather than forcing my voice to sound 'cool' but - on to the next one!