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Beautiful Maze (WB9)

By spry on March 3, 2012 4:48 am

so i wrote this song about 6 years ago in college and its been sitting in my notebook and hasnt seen the light of day in all that time.  i decided to pull it out and finish it this week along with a couple other old tunes on a whim when i got frustrated with the LSDJ track i was working on.  its been a long time since ive worked on stuff like this, but i think its about time.  i could use some CC though cause i feel really rusty :-X

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Though I didn't know it or even how to show it the space behind my eyes was shrinking fast
Though I didn't say it or even ascertain it the visions I'm receiving wouldn't last

Muse, tempt me lightly as evening passes
Translucent sorrow of a lie
Around each blinded corner another path awaits our fate
But if he takes this world to last would he try not to escape?

Though I couldn't slow it or even underscore it the world before my eyes was shrinking fast
Though I couldn't slay it or even just belay it this beast of mine is taking its own path

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Again love the verse melody. Smooth vocals!!! LETS JAM!!!

Cool stripped down sound.  Like your vocals.

This lyricism is awesome. I like the melodies you're going for, though (and, of course, I don't know how many takes you did on this) the singing could be a little more confident on those pitches. But I love the chordal direction you took in this, and this is a really nice piece with some beautiful lyrics.

really enjoyable! amazing vocal work! i agree with jetkick in that you just need to go for it for some of those pitches. throw yourself into it!

This is fantastic, loving it!

thanks guys!  my voice has not had as much practice as i would like lately.. i did the voice in one take though and just kinda went with what i got.  i feel like ill be working on this sort of stuff a little more often in the near future.

nice song! i liked it!! smile

nice one and you have a great voice

Nice!  You should make more music like this. Nice chord progression. Kinda reminds me of the Shins.

"i feel like ill be working on this sort of stuff a little more often in the near future." YAY! smile

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