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STOMACH ACHE
By rana on January 7, 2020 7:11 amえー...皆さん、こんにちは。
「いきなり遅刻かよ！！！」って声も聞こえてきそうですが、sorry for absence about week1 about my tracks.I HAD STOMACH ACHE!!!ってことで腹痛で寝込んでました。すいません。
楽曲のエレピのリフはジンジャーさんが昔使っていたのを思い出して使いましたが、コードワークにはもう一工夫欲しいなぁと思ったりもします。
WeeklyBetas初心者ですのでお手柔らかにどうぞよろしくお願いいたします。
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Good! This happy melody is very fun and a lot of energy!
この音楽は凄いです! Haha sorry, my Japanese is poor...but this song is so happy! Glad you feel better 
I think this was a very enjoyable and jubilant tune . If I may provide a small piece of criticism, perhaps remove one iteration of the drum/melody combination at the beginning and allow the bass line to come in sooner. Allowing changes to occur at a steady pace holds the listener's attention. Other than that, I enjoyed the fast paced electric piano that loops throughout the track.
Nice bright and catchy tune. The timing seemed off at the very beginning but sorts itself out when the drums come in. By the way, nice job on the drums, they sound great.