Seems like a good background for spoken word at the beginning. But then the beat kicks in and it's taking off in another direction. I think i would add an acid melodic lead arpeggiating its way through the space and the beat. As it is it's hypnotic and interesting enough, as a cool futuristic minimalist track. Maybe could use some occasional sound FX in the background. Fav'd it

Seems like a good background for spoken word at the beginning. But then the beat kicks in and it's taking off in another direction. I think i would add an acid melodic lead arpeggiating its way through the space and the beat. As it is it's hypnotic and interesting enough, as a cool futuristic minimalist track. Maybe could use some occasional sound FX in the background. Fav'd it

Yeah, I see what you mean. There is definitely room for some kind of arp, and now that you mention it, I kinda miss it. Yesterday I said to myself not to overcrowd it, but some interesting FX/earcandy and/or an ARP would work great. I might put some more work into this! Thanks for your input.

[quote=george bowles]Seems like a good background for spoken word at the beginning. But then the beat kicks in and it's taking off in another direction. I think i would add an acid melodic lead arpeggiating its way through the space and the beat. As it is it's hypnotic and interesting enough, as a cool futuristic minimalist track. Maybe could use some occasional sound FX in the background. Fav'd it[/quote] Yeah, I see what you mean. There is definitely room for some kind of arp, and now that you mention it, I kinda miss it. Yesterday I said to myself not to overcrowd it, but some interesting FX/earcandy and/or an ARP would work great. I might put some more work into this! Thanks for your input.

You're so welcome! It did help when you asked for input, normally I am not sure if people want to hear it or not. Also I can't listen to all the tracks no matter how hard I've been trying I only made it the first few weeks then got overwhelmed. I am going back to some older weeks too. I'm glad you might add more, I tend to like this site as a way to generate material then go back to it for official release which sometimes involves a remaster, sprucing up, or overdubbing:)

[quote=qp][quote=george bowles]Seems like a good background for spoken word at the beginning. But then the beat kicks in and it's taking off in another direction. I think i would add an acid melodic lead arpeggiating its way through the space and the beat. As it is it's hypnotic and interesting enough, as a cool futuristic minimalist track. Maybe could use some occasional sound FX in the background. Fav'd it[/quote] Yeah, I see what you mean. There is definitely room for some kind of arp, and now that you mention it, I kinda miss it. Yesterday I said to myself not to overcrowd it, but some interesting FX/earcandy and/or an ARP would work great. I might put some more work into this! Thanks for your input. [/quote] You're so welcome! It did help when you asked for input, normally I am not sure if people want to hear it or not. Also I can't listen to all the tracks no matter how hard I've been trying I only made it the first few weeks then got overwhelmed. I am going back to some older weeks too. I'm glad you might add more, I tend to like this site as a way to generate material then go back to it for official release which sometimes involves a remaster, sprucing up, or overdubbing:)