Yayayay, this'un! Guys and Dolls rehearsal time made awesome.

Yayayay, this'un! Guys and Dolls rehearsal time made awesome.

:D

This kind of has a tense, subdued feel. Cool stuff.

This kind of has a tense, subdued feel. Cool stuff.

sounds awesome when the beat finally kicks in... very subtle

sounds awesome when the beat finally kicks in... very subtle

Really love when the kicks comes as well!

Really love when the kicks comes as well!

thanks guys!

thanks guys!

I find it a bit repetitive, personally.  It doesn't really seem to start until half way through.  About two thirds of the way through there is a very brief glimmer of an interesting track but it finishes too soon.  Also due to the fact there is no proper ending on this, it does give me the impression of a WIP.

I find it a bit repetitive, personally. It doesn't really seem to start until half way through. About two thirds of the way through there is a very brief glimmer of an interesting track but it finishes too soon. Also due to the fact there is no proper ending on this, it does give me the impression of a WIP.

i might redo the ending a bit. I was kind of going for a more minimalist approach, slowly adding parts. Are you saying I should build the song quicker and sooner and then extend on the phrases in the second part?

i might redo the ending a bit. I was kind of going for a more minimalist approach, slowly adding parts. Are you saying I should build the song quicker and sooner and then extend on the phrases in the second part?