Hey, welcome to Weekly Beats! Glad you made it for the home stretch.

First off, gotta say that you had me at the title - had to check it out from there.

I like the groove you have going on in here! Samples are really interesting and I like the chopping you did. For me personally, I think the kick is pumping a little too hard - I like those samples, and I was trying to hear more of what was going on with them...but the kick was a bit dominant.

Great first entry! Looking forward to next week

Hey, welcome to Weekly Beats! Glad you made it for the home stretch. First off, gotta say that you had me at the title - had to check it out from there. I like the groove you have going on in here! Samples are really interesting and I like the chopping you did. For me personally, I think the kick is pumping a little too hard - I like those samples, and I was trying to hear more of what was going on with them...but the kick was a bit dominant. Great first entry! Looking forward to next week :)

I'm not entirely sure what to make of the title, it's quite something.
Nevertheless, the song itself is really nice, very chill lo-fi vibe, though the ducking is pretty aggressive, perhaps a touch too much.
- Spider

I'm not entirely sure what to make of the title, it's quite something. Nevertheless, the song itself is really nice, very chill lo-fi vibe, though the ducking is pretty aggressive, perhaps a touch too much. - Spider

Welcome to WB, Ourgirlsally!!!

I think the ducking itself is quite strong, though I would really raise the piano volume a little bit so not only the kick is noticeable, but the ducking action is more noticeable even, if that's your taste. Quite interesting choice of samples, BTW.

As constructive criticism, maybe, since you asked (so being nitpicky)... maybe build a more elaborate intro/outro section, so the song has a more recognizable structure. I repeat: I'm being pedantic just to try to add some specific feedback.

I dug the beat, quite indeed.

Good work, and welcome. Better late than never

Welcome to WB, Ourgirlsally!!! I think the ducking itself is quite strong, though I would really raise the piano volume a little bit so not only the kick is noticeable, but the ducking action is more noticeable even, if that's your taste. Quite interesting choice of samples, BTW. As constructive criticism, maybe, since you asked (so being nitpicky)... maybe build a more elaborate intro/outro section, so the song has a more recognizable structure. I repeat: I'm being pedantic just to try to add some specific feedback. I dug the beat, quite indeed. Good work, and welcome. Better late than never :)