Murder Mystery
By orangedrink on October 21, 2018 11:12 pm
Just trying to do something that doesn't sound like Orange Drink, which is a total Orange Drink move. Maybe too much bass, not loud enough vocals on the chorus? I am really running short on time, so WHATEVS. Please let me know what you think. Any adjustments? Maybe the vocal performance needs a tune up?
Lyrics:
the dutchess and the duke
looking smart, descend the staircase
everyone applauds and
everyone looks in awe
…except one
and suddenly a start
all in shock heard an explosion
fearing it’s close
they turn around and run
…except one
the duke, while fighting pain
scans the crowd for the offender
upon inspection
this is not my blood
the dutchess feigning pain
rises up and gives the signal
the duke cries out but
it’s already done
run away
run away
i’m certain
we’ll all be blamed
they’re out again
it’s all in vain
we’ve all been framed
hide the locket well inside the frame
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