Great groove on this, super-summery. Like the noise creeping through the gate on the guitar too...

Great groove on this, super-summery. Like the noise creeping through the gate on the guitar too...

Cool track. I can feel that breeze, alright.

Cool track. I can feel that breeze, alright.

I like the atmosphere, but maby try out using a tight indy style drum kit instead of house drum machines would complement the style more, maby.

I like the atmosphere, but maby try out using a tight indy style drum kit instead of house drum machines would complement the style more, maby.

This is great. I expected it to go in a minimal tech direction with the intro but then the guitar comes in and picks it up and runs in a new direction. I actually love the contrast and complement of the styles, also even with the 808 you've not gone heavy with the kick. It's like a happy Joy Division. It does beg for a vocal I that would really cap it off.

This is great. I expected it to go in a minimal tech direction with the intro but then the guitar comes in and picks it up and runs in a new direction. I actually love the contrast and complement of the styles, also even with the 808 you've not gone heavy with the kick. It's like a happy Joy Division. It does beg for a vocal I that would really cap it off.

Thanks!  Yeah, the noise I just kind of left in.  Single-coils; it's inevitable, though I can reduce it if I turn the right way.  I might be tempted to re-track; there's a little tempo-dragging on one glissando that's bugging me now.

Thanks!  Pretty much only in the song, though--it's still snowing here.

Thanks!  After the deadline I could hear a complementary descending guitar figure and a chordal part, which I'd like to get in there.  Nice that you picked up on the Joy Division--when I was playing it, I was thinking New Order (or the NO-influence on Bottomless Pit).  I'm not hearing a space for my voice, but I could easily hear a female singer over it. 

[quote=sinewave]Great groove on this, super-summery. Like the noise creeping through the gate on the guitar too...[/quote] Thanks! Yeah, the noise I just kind of left in. Single-coils; it's inevitable, though I can reduce it if I turn the right way. I might be tempted to re-track; there's a little tempo-dragging on one glissando that's bugging me now. [quote=cfurrow]Cool track. I can feel that breeze, alright.[/quote] Thanks! Pretty much only in the song, though--it's still snowing here. [quote=Robroy]This is great. I expected it to go in a minimal tech direction with the intro but then the guitar comes in and picks it up and runs in a new direction. I actually love the contrast and complement of the styles, also even with the 808 you've not gone heavy with the kick. It's like a happy Joy Division. It does beg for a vocal I that would really cap it off.[/quote] Thanks! After the deadline I could hear a complementary descending guitar figure and a chordal part, which I'd like to get in there. Nice that you picked up on the Joy Division--when I was playing it, I was thinking New Order (or the NO-influence on Bottomless Pit). I'm not hearing a space for my voice, but I could easily hear a female singer over it.

wow,... somebody is ready for summer! nice one good subtle stereo fx on the percs ... cool track :-) ...smile errupting on my face!

wow,... somebody is ready for summer! nice one good subtle stereo fx on the percs ... cool track :-) ...smile errupting on my face!

Kind of remembers me the happy days of The Cure. Yeah, put some Robert Smith on it.

Kind of remembers me the happy days of The Cure. Yeah, put some Robert Smith on it. :o